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NICE I NEED MORE OF THAT DECEPTION MIND GAMES.
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Oh my! I already added this to my library,i cant wait to watch how things infold. I’m loving this already. Good work author
I really like this story, this is great. there maybe some error, but that's normal, just make sure to reread and fix it in the future. Overall, I like it and will continue read it
Dont mind those negative reviews, this story has a good plot development so far.This story has Huge kingdom buildingAnd Large variety of power class between reality and vr. The mc progress was perfectly good.
Sorry but dropping it early. The novel has a lot of fillers and it feels like the author is underestimating soccer players too much or the mc is just trash. First, the task given is 2km running, drink 2 litters, Spend 2 hours in the gym. The mc [author] created a loophole and not realizing it, just run 2km in the gym and gets double reward but nope. Also, a soccer player can run around 6 to 8.5 miles per game or 9.7km to 13km. I understand that the mc is a goalkeeper but 2km is ridiculously low for the mc to whine about how hard it is. Btw, I understand that the latter chapters may be better but not all reader willing to go through almost 20+ chapters of mediocre writing to get there. Anyway good luck.
Great story, the start was perfect and you describe the world in which they are living well. I have nothing bad to point out in your novel, your grammar and punctuation are good which is important for a novel.Would recommend this to everyone who likes system novels.
Slow pace novel. It is lackluster to read.
your novel is one of the best I had ever read in my lifethank man...peace✌
In the first work, the author's story died due to a critical error, which he was not even going to correct.In the second work, the author's pen has changed, it looks more like a swamp and a routine, a lot of unnecessary information in which you drown, not understanding why you are reading this.In the third work, he becomes Chinese, if you are at least a little familiar with Chinese works, literally from the first chapter and passages you can understand where this will lead.I want to note that Chinese authors are extremely hardworking and creative.However, this cannot overshadow their main shortcomings.Nationalism, which does not seem to be in this work.But 100%, there will be a lot of water here.I also want to say that the Chinese have not been able to create an OP character for 500 chapters.They have a mania for limiting the growth of their characters through various shenanigans.In the previous 2 works, the author limited the growth of MK, even despite all the cheats that were in MK.I strongly doubt that the author will be able to raise this story, with his passion to limit the speed of ms and write 5 chapters of dubious information, instead of an adequate and understandable 1 chapter.I wish this story good luck, perseverance and more intelligence.
Nice plot and amazing development..Keep going author.. l can't wait to read next chapter..plzz upload more quickly....I really like the story..
✓ Hey there everyone It's the author I really hope you all enjoy the series which I have installed it is technically my first novel. So If there's any area you think I got wrong please comment and also don't forget to support for more extra chapters