love the story, has some interesting parts, overall it's a good story though I'll read this later cuz in my free time
i like the world build of this novel at the start it explains every detail of the world origin
This story is great but there are SEVERAL issues with it. The author has basically abandoned it for his newest thing, so there is zero consistency in the updates. The chapters themselves are also extremely overpriced, as well as the privilege. You’re better off spending your money on other books.
author anyway u could update more chapters, I'm hooked and wanna read more.
I like this type of story. The MC's journey to become strong is still long, I like how the author doesn't make him strong too quickly. But I hope you can speed up the pace of the story a bit, and reduce some unnecessary dialogues, and be able to describe the MC's feelings. I'm sure you can be better.
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its'sa good story so far from what i read
I like the story and the Mc, but I must wait some time to dive into it. Keep up the good work, and have fun writing. This is the best advice I can give.
ngl if I'm being honest, the introduction part annoyed the hell out of me that i almost punched my phone. also this story reminds me of a Manhwa was it or Manhua that I used to read 4yrs ago and i tell ya that story is so annoying that every comments I read every chapter are all about how annoying or stupid the mc is or how annoying the in-laws are or how annoying the ex is
I just want to say that you can check out my other novel, Demon Being System, I assure you'll love it. Just try the prologue and first few chapters.
One of the great things about this novel is that it has well-defined and deep characters. Not like other stories wherein side characters as just as is. Here, even side characters grow as well.
"Wahh he plays that guitar nicely" JN