I liked this story until the moment when the mc became a pathetic simp...................................................................................
Has the same cover as MMO: Pierce Heaven Til’ It Breaks. The novel itself is about what you’d expect. There’s nothing particularly special, and the comedy is revolving around the usual topics you see in webnovel.
This novel has a lot of potential, but like most novels on this app, it suffers from a lack of proficiency in English. Making an overall pretty unbearable read for me.If semi-broken English is not a problem for you, give it a try.
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So far this is one of the better ones that I've read from this genre. I'm curious to see where the author takes the story. I like the main character, and I think the author has a good plot and so far it's been entertaining and enjoyable to read. The characters are interesting and the author does well portraying their thoughts and intentions while still hunting that more development for the future. I look forward to the rest of the story.
So extremely disappointing that this did not get picked there was no real bad novel that got picked this time unlock other novels just ones I didn't like
DO NOT WASTE YOUR TIME WITH THIS NOVEL.There is no character development, or world building, nothing. The only thing that happens here, is the author just explaining how games in our world are played by other people. I swear that you’d be off better just playing the games mentioned here. The MC is the dumbest character I’ve seen in a while, total moron. Super forced dialogues, cringe dialogues, and overall bad storytelling. I’d say that the author didn’t know what to really write, so he just created a type of base of the story, and relied on literally explaining how games in our wolrd are about. The protagonist is supposed to be a developer or something like that, but we never see actual development because the “system” does everything. And because of that, the protagonist is… no protagonist at all. He is not the main character in his own story because we only know about him when the “fans” want another part of the game series.That is all.
it's good but it just seems so..............................................................................................................
great novel so far. I hope the author doesn't change his way of writing or place characters recklessly. All in all, a beautiful novel that I will follow.
Im really enjoying the story. It feel fresh with how he deliveries the writing. I also like he spaces the words out so I never forget where I'm reading. It overall makes the experience much better and definitely with more time I could see this being a number one book. Also African American MC me likey
Dropping this after 30 chapters.While the setting and world is quite interesting and intriguing, the story so far is filled to the brim with plot holes, plot armor and forced plot.Writing is barely the average on webnovel with a few errors every chapter.
I'm going to leave an honest review here for any new readers that are looking for a story with the best world building, greatest character development, and the finest dialog you've ever seen.This story... has all those things, but you need to give it some time. Character development starts around chapter 70, and the world building isn't really satisfying till around the same chapter.However, to those who do give it a chance, thank you and please support this story in any way you can. I think it has some interesting arcs the later the story gets, and hope you all enjoy it :)