good story
Ether I love u, go to bed knowing that.
Just read and you'll see, it's really bad toward the newest chapters, the chapters are short and kind of cringe. But if you can read it still then i think that at least the story is somewhat held togheter and still has potential to become good.
I like this story quite a bit, but do beware that there will be racial insults (mostly between chinese and japanese dudes) and a few "China is the greatest" moments sprinkled in every now and then.
But otherwise i really enjoy reading this story.
Ch276- So far its pretty good. A nice modern story that combines traditional martial arts, science, and battle Royal gaming mechanics. It does start off slow for the first couple of chapters but once he gets a headset, the story picks up to a good pace. The author has lot of other good novels too, with this being no different.
wrong species
It updateeeeeedddd!!! Was this picked up again by some God? Thank you so much!! I hope you continue updating this!!
I like the blurb. I like the characters but I can’t fall in love with them. I can’t lose myself in their world because as of chapter 140 the author just tells us what is happening. They don’t show us. It’s a shame because this novel has the bones to be great.
Author, create more dialogue. Stop summarizing the story and let us see/experience the scenes. I don’t want Ichi to tell me something happened, write the scene out.
Hopefully, you will take my advice bc this really could be a fantastic read.
its good I have read so many novels in which plot feels very slow and I tend to drop them but this one felt great neither slow nor fast paced
I'm not good enough to write constructive criticism so I'll just say this novel is awesomeAuthor continued like this
the story is good but it needs more deep in the main cast ,but overall is good and where is the continued chapters?
I have also just read the first few chapters yet but I can see a lot of potential in your story.I'm not the biggest fantasy fan however I think that many people, who like fantasy, would enjoy this novel as the setting and the plot are very intriguing.Just like the others already pointed out, there are a few grammar errors but all in all I didn't see it as a big problem. Aside from that, I like your writing style:)I will continue reading this so keep it up author!