PaulJones
Okay so I'm only about halfway through what is available to read right now ( chap. 156ish) at this point in the story I have to say it has been very well thought out. No glaring plot holes or inconsistencies. The plot flows from one scenario to another smoothly. Not many grammar errors. So the Mc is a powerful primordial God of destruction who begins to question his and the other gods origins. He decides to destroy the world that he and his family of primordial gods have made to their outrage. He loses the fight to be reborn on the very planet he wanted to destroy and is on a journey to rebuild his strength and have his revenge. If you are down for a dark MC who is meticulous, cunning, ruthless, and merciless this is your novel. The mc has been shown to have a very deep grasp of most situations allowing for a near perfect idea of what would play out allowing him to manipulate most situations to his absolute favor. He also is showing signs of maybe growing as well. Perhaps his time on the world he and his family made will change his outlook a little... or not we shall see .
it is a very very good novel.But I have flashbacks about "My Great Demon System".....both has their sides that is for sure. Brutallity is the "My Great demon System" and demon like. the oposite this novel!!!
As far as I've read, this book isn't bad! TBH!The entire plot is amazing, a cooking up skills of writing has sprang up.Author, well-done, it ain't easy to write! You hit a good point on lesson giving!!!XD.
I truly believe that I can survive on mount Tai if I had wifi and electronics, my hands will keep me warm when i vist those websites If you know what i mean...
If you saw pugilistic and thought sweet a fist fighting boxing style of story you will be disappointed.A pugilist is a fist fighting boxing style for which the title misleads. (I didn't know it was boxing specific but I knew it had involved fist fighting)The main character uses a sword.This is my first of 2 gripes.The second is that it the writing seems to almost rely on the fact that people have some prior knowledge of the setting.I've haven't struggled to follow along though so it isn't story breakingThe story is otherwise fairly interesting with a great translation.
Ah you see, i don't very good with English.So, what can i tell for you ... Your novel have own unique thing, and now it's depends on you...How you using this weapons ??? If you can using this weapons, development of story novel Will have good way from myriad of ideas can you add it on story'.....Sorry for my bad grammar because i'm not speaking English he...he...he...And confusing review on your novel
Couldn't put it down read in about three day. I hope this wasn't the end. Love the flow of the character. Wish know where their journey lead them. Some of the side characters seem to fade away. Wish know their stories. But over all great story.
It's a constant loss of brain cells reading this book, like holy ****. The story flow is choppy and unreadable, the constant missusage of he/she is a bother to read and the mc looks as brain dead as the story flow.
if you're "lucky and extremely lucky" or "unlucky and extremely unlucky" and if you're enjoy comedy just read this.Dice Dice Dice Dice Dice Dice
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4 star for now ..will update later....................................................................................................................................
