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Not worth reading, the MC spends more time fishing than anything else and as of chapter twenty we have no clue what his talent does.2.8 stars.
This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
This book was so good! I absolutely loved it. My favourite part of the bool was when the main character was apart of the supposed 'variety show'...It was fun to read and imagine him escaping the police every time.
Just the title alone is interesting and I'm expecting lots of incredible moments in this one. The book may lack chaps as of the moment, making the world background and story progression somewhat unclear, but I'm confident enough to say that this book will end up great, considering the author's skill with his craft. I'll leave this here to tell future readers not to miss this one.
I enjoyed the storyline, it's very consistent and makes you want to carry on to the next episode. It really is an hidden gem, but the writer can still improve more with the words/spellings
Actually, I'm poor at understanding this kind of story. Wow! But this one is easy to read and imagine the scene. Try it! You won't regrer
This novel made me mad... even though ı have certain amount immunity to dense and hypocrite mc's ( at least what ı believe) ım speechless.
It’s pretty nice, not too complex and books like these are really my favorite genre to sit down and read. They’re right on par with fantasy novels! I love it.
I really want to love this book but the author spoilt it with too much redundancy and unnecessary plots instead of progressing the story.
FL is supposed to be a strong FL but we don’t get to see it because the author strips her of everything but piles up insults and distractions. It is just too frustrating because we waste money to read this books but at the end of the day you end up with nothing.
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Stating my review as of C51, I held the top Non-Author review on the original so please read the whole review.I would check on it daily till it finally was removed by the author himself. It was a great book that I rated 4.5 Stars for having great Writing Quality, Stable updates, Good Character Design, the only issue was the lacking story development which was due to low chapter count, and lower world background due to the main character as of then not expanding his horizons past 3 places, all described and imaginable through context, just a lack of world knowledge. This story has, in my opinion, different from the original too much for it to be considered a replacement.The Writing Quality is lower, at 3.5 stars, but I rounded to 4 due to the rating system in place. The author can't seem to stay on topic and butts in the story to explain things that need no explanation, and could if was a good author, be explained in dialogue or thought. For example, the heart cultivation system, they deviate for a minute to explain the heart cultivation system, how it's based on the soul and therefore one of the hardest things in the cultivation world to raise, and how only the 3 top immortal emperors have reached its peak.He can think back on his death while cultivating in his store," I could have caught up to him and beat him if I had raised my heart cultivation to Heart Void... I'm still stuck at Heart unmoving mountain, I may have had a glimpse into it previously but my cultivation now is simply too low
The story has an interesting concept and decent writing quality, so I would recommend other people to give it a read. Its a good story that I would like to read more of but the updates come whenever the author has time to work on the story. I know that personal life gets in the way of writing, but I had to reread two previous chapters because I forgot what happened before due to the gaps. So be warned, this isn’t one of those stories where there is a 5k - 10k word update every day.
