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So exciting to this to start, I know the story will be fire
Story is actually so good and so funny. But I just don't understand why Luca's so clueless when he grow up in orphanage.Luca is such a sweet heart. ?? And such a money-grubber and effin workaholic, dude please get some rest you're making me so tired. Sometimes I want to enter your dungeon and knock you out.Xavier, OMO he is such a husband material huhuhuhu. He is so patient and understanding (based on how ambiguous Luca's word are) ??? I also feel you whenever you got blue balls even tho I don't have balls.Ollie is so supportive friend. And do everything on Luca's whims and wants. hahahaha, and boy really think he can get a wife. ??Kyle he's the only one with braincells in the group but always on such situations because he use it too much ??And Jax omg such a cutie. Must protect (and his children)And please more on D29 and Sid banters.
The book is really different from the normal fantasy type novels but that's what made it very interesting, nice job author ???
The book is really different from the normal fantasy type novels but that's what made it very interesting, nice job author ???
Really good for what I've read up to. That initial time skip kind of gave me a disconnect but the groove came back after a bit. The development so far has been decent but there could be some improvements. Character design is also a bit basic, but that's better than being terrible!All in all, very good. I recommend!
Nice nobel, Very good characters, interesting story, the story has quite a lot of fire, you are on the right track, I recommend that you go further with the relationship of the characters, keep it up.
thank you for the daily updates, its become part of my routine to read 3 chapters of this webnovel. great mc focus and relentless in training, love the story so far
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Great book, would really recommend it. Just wish it had more updating days.
Really good. If you like shadow slave, this is for you. Ugfugfutfutfutf7tf7tf7tf76f76f7tf8tfutf
I think the book is amazing personally..............Read it you might like it??And give ratings ,like ,comment and add to you library too
Very beautiful and well written work. The progress of the plot was perfect. Characters are very interesting and good. Everything is just perfect…. Except for the update. The author seriously stopped updating at the very juiciest part of the novel. Don’t get me wrong, this book is really great and well written. But not done. Thanks author Lena.
