This novel is quite adorable and amusing, with a light-hearted tone. Although there isn't much depth to the plot, it still manages to captivate me, particularly when the husband wakes up. Given that it's a male-oriented (HE) story, I find it enjoyable as a quick read, even if there's room for a bit more development.
Number 1 elyon glazer here, this better be tolerable
The grammar is pure cancer.
Illegible.
Half words are left and stuck together.
Example:
He finished. After...
Is written as:
He finishfter.
Not to mention the author uses no pronouns.
Literally uses the mc's name 9/10 sentence.
Example:
Yassine looked in horor. He thought this was a spirit. What should he do?
Is written as:
Yassine looked in horror. Yassine thought this was a spirit. What should Yassine do?
For everything. Everything.
Does it get better? Its pure brain damage.
Don't try Ending Maker... you will die of frustration.
The updated chapter are terrible, especially the pronouns, any chance it will be fixed ?
it should be around 200s. I don't remember exact chapter though
The gods have blessed is with an Update
not really
The narrative started with a clichéd premise and, unfortunately, devolved into a predictable drama/drama-with-dog-elements towards the second half. Initially, I had hoped for more engaging palace intrigue, but that aspect fell short, making the later parts feel rather平淡.
The main character (ML) is portrayed as tall, handsome, and possessing an array of positive traits such as purity, gentleness, and innocence. However, the protagonist (MC) also displays an overwhelming power, resembling a classic Mary or Gary Sue trope, which brought a chuckle. Despite these clichés, I found the story relaxing and it served my current reading mood quite well.
One amusing dynamic stood out – the interaction between JMS (apparently MC's brother's partner) and Murphy, two seemingly stoic individuals who unexpectedly engage in witty banter, provided a delightful touch of humor.
On a side note, I personally would have appreciated a deeper exploration of the relationship between MC's brother and JMS, or Minister Jiang, potentially with a hint of Alpha-Beta dynamics, something that would definitely pique my interest. Fingers crossed for that in future translations!
I haven't delved into the additional content yet due to difficulty finding a suitable translation platform. However, I've heard that the extras offer a glimpse into Murphy's love story. I'm hoping that these supplementary chapters will be translated eventually.
In conclusion, while the story had its flaws, it was enjoyable overall, and I might consider revisiting it at some point.
This novel is a good read 6/10.My only complain is about MC's lovelife.This novel is good enough to read even without MC's pointless harem.
did he have any wives and harem ?
Does anyone know if it's dropped or something else...