I love this book. Samuel is such a strong character
There are grammatical errors, true, but I like the way the story is going so far. I want to see how it ends. I just wish it wasn't so expensive though!
Nice storyline, characters, interesting plot! Exciting read, specially when I found out who was Mal!
Trash with no happy ending.
Elizabeth, hi... I'm just trying to make sure if you're out there, or if maybe I should just give up on my hope for updates? :'o(
Anyway, hope you're all right...
134 chapters 6/16/24
how often do you update? plsss answer me
84 chapters
6/10/23
update please
Very compelling story. At the beginning I thought that she will be a piano player, but later I found out that she is doing something out of the cliché - Great idea!
I thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of the narrative; it was intricately crafted, flawlessly written, and utterly captivating. The protagonist, initially gifted but somewhat limited in matters of love, evolved beautifully. The female lead, with her wisdom, strong character, and striking appearance, played a remarkable role. The supporting cast added depth, even if they occasionally took a backseat. The plot twist was well-executed, and the romantic elements were equally compelling. I couldn't put the book down and finished it in just two days – it was an excellent read. This story, especially the ABO dynamics, stood out as a favorite. I'm eager to explore more works from this talented author.
It's hard to believe that this novel was written by the same author as "Rule Breaker," and it claims to belong to the same "franchise," though the underlying concepts don't align and it defies logic to think they share a universe. If "Rule Breaker" was intended as a rough draft, perhaps the author experienced some kind of creative setback after finishing (so far) that previous work, resulting in this novel that lacks any progression or improvement. Another theory is that there was a disagreement between the author and their ghostwriter towards the end of "Rule Breaker," leading to an abrupt conclusion. The author, overly confident and ungrateful to their unseen collaborator, seems to have intentionally crafted a poorly received novel as a response.
I won't repeat the criticisms mentioned by other reviewers, but suffice it to say, anything that made "Rule Breaker" enjoyable is conspicuously absent from this disappointment.