This story is to slow! Get on with it.
The grammar is all messed up
I find it’s a wonderful and interesting book
Such a good story would definitely recommend reading
The stakes in this passage are deceptively simple on the surface — it's just a family trying to make money. Breakfast stall. Pig farming. But underneath that, there's this terrifying question hanging over every decision: what happens if they fail? What happens if someone reports them for secretly raising pigs? What happens if the policies shift again and all their hard work becomes communal property? Jin Yan voices it directly when he says he's afraid someone will find out and report them. And Jin Miao's inner thoughts confirm it — people ARE already doing this, secretly, and some have even lost pigs. The risk is real. But the bigger conflict is internal: Jin Miao knows the future. She knows Wang Erwazi made his first pot of gold raising pigs in those exact conditions. She knows what works. But she's choosing not to help. That's the real tension here — not whether they'll succeed, but whether Jin Miao will ever choose to be part of this family again. The father's intervention at the end is a masterclass in raising stakes while keeping them grounded. "Don't quit your factory job yet. Wait until the business takes off." "Start with just two pigs." "Take it slow." He's the voice of caution in a family full of people wanting to leap. And honestly? That's what makes you keep reading. Not because you're unsure if they'll succeed, but because you want to see if Jin Miao will ever let herself care enough to guide them properly.
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This service is “misleading” I paid more money than $30 to read half a book. While the storyline I read was interesting, it was filled with so many “typographical errors”. And, to make it worst, you kept asking me for more money every few chapters. I would definitely not recommend this.
I'm sorry it seems as though their are holes in the story. I understand that poison ivy is Kamila, but who took the poison? how did Randle and the president get involved? I thought the president was an allied? what's going on? who's attempting to bring down the Petrov?
Very heart capturing! Well done :)
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Love the story so far but chapters too short
Love love LOVE this story!! Can’t wait until book 2!!!