just here to review for a fastpass event
Thy, The Primordial Saint Lord have high hope on Thee, you have a long journey ahead of you Junior, keep walking in path of Dao
That push tired me out completely and utterly. I could barely stand on my legs, so I wobbled for a few steps, found that I couldn't balance myself properly now, and fell into the pool again, where I promptly passed out for the second time in one day.
A really interesting novel, a romance with mistery and investigation a mix that i really like, when i start to read it i didn't expect this. I hope the story will go on also after the graduation ?
It's sad to see these novels, seeing their reviews, both good and bad, everything seemed lively and now... there's nothing left. And not only in this novel, many become abandoned works.
I like the "old veteran" type of of MC. The protagonist is already experienced, sometimes power progression feels a little repetitive so skipping all that 'growing up' character development can make it easier on the readers. But it comes at the cost of the person's innocence. A typical young and naive MC can feel a little stupid at times but we can be immersed in their individual perspective and character developments and understand why a character would make certain kinds of choices afterwards. By literally combining the 2 into the same body I feel happy getting the best of both worlds. Evin utilizing the valuable wisdom that comes with age while also experiencing moments of first time innocence and ignorance is just so adorable.
This novel had a very good premise. I love military novels where the MC is a strong general/leader or is a cultivation/system novel paired with military. HOWEVER, it quickly turns sh*t. Cliches upon cliches, the MC is a beta cuck who attempts to r*pe a girl by chapter 9. He has an extremely overpowered system yet decides to slack off. I don't recommend this unless you like ecchi crap.
It needs rating so possibly it is nice and i am very much looking forward for other updates ????????????????????????????????????????? soooo keep up the good work
My only problem is the grammer, you put "u" instead of "you
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.......you're erasing the personality and characters you developed. Castiel clearly showed that having eternal life was overrated.