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this novel have charector that I like it it has paission about being low key and far awai from the dengor of courese he takes action i like it about it
I really enjoyed reading this novel. I highly recommend it to the people who enjoy reading this novel to people who like to read system, reincarnation harem novels
Maybe shameless of me to rate my own novel but oh well. I would like to go ahead and thank everyone that is and that will read my novel. I know that there will be mistakes, might get slow, or maybe even boring. But that is why I need you all to help me fix these mistakes and send me on the right path as a new writer, so please don't just outright hate on my wok and only give constructive criticism. Thank you again and I hope everyone enjoys reading.
The story is seemingly well thought out, the world building is decent, it has an easy flow when it comes to reading it. The characters could be fleshed out more but the main character is basically a blank slate so I can't really complain... There's minor errors in every chapter regarding the writing quality but it's pretty readable for the most part.
I started reading this book around when it had 50 chapters, it’s been a long time since then and the book has developed a lot, so it’s time I make a review.Note: I’m probably biased due to having emotional attachment to the story at this pointWorld Building: 4/5The world is well crafted, scenes are described expertly and really draws you into the world as if you were there yourself.Characters: 3/5Characters all feel like individuals, at least the ones that matter anyway, there are a few arrogant young masters at the start but I suspect that they will disappear more and more as the mc gets stronger and is meeting older people as the antagonists.Story: 3/5For the most part the story is fairly standard at the start, mc is the weak underdog nobody expects anything from but develops to become a force to be reckoned with over the course of the story, though later on in the story the mc goes on a different than usual path compared to the usual heroics you might be used to.Writing Quality: 4/5The writing is fairly good with few mistakes in spelling or grammar, but nobody is ever perfect especially when English isn’t their first language.Updating Stability: 4/5There were some rougher patches previously but things have settled to usually be 2 chapters each day unless stated otherwise in the discord
Ngl this sysnopsis is interesting af
Ngl this sysnopsis is interesting af
Ngl this sysnopsis is interesting af
Ngl this sysnopsis is interesting af
Don't worry guys even if this novel will be dropped I will invest my money to hire a translator the rates are pretty cheap and I could keep it translated for atleast 4 months I'll keep you guys posted if it gets dropped see yah soon!
The MC is a real badass and he story is really really good. Just ignore the translation or train your MTL. Have a good read people and just bear with it for a bit hehe.
Extremely dissappointed by the flow of the story, feels like whatever comes goes and there is no real goals laid out feels like the MC is living every day as it is. there is also no proper planning or thoughts being down I stopped at chapter 49 where he traded mana Crystals for half price for a good relation like the city lord even knew he had mana crystals Which forced him to trade But he didnt know! such a piss off how the story progresses the more I read.
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A little story that was when I went to the stationary book shop, and I wanted to buy a book, but I saw a book titled "how to save money' then I decided not to buy a book to save my money ..
