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This novel does not deliver what it promises. I was really excited at the prospect of multiple world line transmigration. But instead we got the regular old system that gives rewards for every unique monster killed. What was the point of meeting mage mc when all he get’s from him is 2 moves that in less then 10 chapters become mediocre. I was expecting his powers to develop through interacting with his other selves but now it’s just another system novel. I reas 75 chapters in total and there was no change to this so Im dropping it here.
At Chapter 23This is a very good Naruto fanfiction. The writing quality is very good. The sentences are well structured and easy to understand and the grammar is also very good. The chapters are also quite long which is even better.The story is developing very well and is focused on the MC. There is almost no inconsistency in the story so far and the MC is developing at a very reasonable pace for someone having future knowledge of the Naruto world.So far there have been very few characters which have been focused upon other than the MC, with them being his Academy Sensei and the Third Hokage. This aspect is very good as I don't want to read more about characters other than the MC, other than their interaction with the MC and their perception of the MC and his actions. And while the story may feel somewhat slow to others, I enjoy reading about how the MC trains and plans for the future. This will lay a very good groundwork for future development of the story.The MC has a calm and rational personality and thoroughly plans his course of action, such as he follows a very well hashed out training plan. He is not OP from the start and does not have any cheats like a system or wishes from GOD or ROB, which makes this fic even better. There has been a lack of good naruto fanfictions such as this one which does not have any cheats and where the MC is also calm and rational without being an anti-hero or an outright villain. The MC is also not arrogant even though he has been at the top of his class for 2 years and though he is cautious to not gain any unwanted attention from Danzo, he doesn't portray himself as weak.So overall I am very satisfied with this fanfic and looking forward to new chapters. I also hope that the author completes this fanfic.Kudos to the author.
Yaay a sequel. I really like this story I wonder what surprises will await for this one. It started with an interesting tempo. I am waiting to see what will be the mood in this part of the story.
U did a wonderful job here this is a must read There was no dull moment at all this piece is a blast???U did a very nice job here thumbs up ????
A very interesting read indeed, I found it to be a new concept in a System Genre, haven't read a novel like this still now. well-written characters and excellent story development. Way to go author.And one more thing.*Blooop!!!!* This is good.
Giving my book a 5-star review because I, the author, know how much work I am putting into this novel. The plot, world build, characters, and everything have been revised countless times to put you at the edge of your seats. I hope you give this masterpiece a try and drop a review. Your help is greatly appreciated. Update stability: 2 chps/day
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MC has very surface level personality. He doesn't really work for anything and things just fall into his hands. First day he goes out he finds a dungeon. Then he gets a weapon eating weapon with unlimited growth. Then he actually claims the dungeon. And when he goes to find a boss, he just gets a mythical skill. And at that moment I stopped caring and stopped reading
I doubt 99% of Chinese novels are written by AI ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
First 40 chapters are done by a good translator, but chapters 41 onwards are complete garbage done by a machine translator with so many spelling and grammar errors that its give me a headache just trying to read it.
This novel is similar to many already posted long ago on this platform i don't want to be rude to any readers and publishers, but all they did was change all of the characters names. The plot is basically the same and everything like many others have said this novel is a knockoff of another.