AmandaMadden
Yes, I've become a spider. So what??......................................................................................................
Talks about not wanting to having typical Ln repays then kills of lover sister and friend by his brother and he all good no mental problems nothing so basically lied
One of the best eastern fantasy novels from trail read. The Nobel is so much fun. I hope this will get selected.MC is mature. This novel is different from all the eastern fantasy novels I had read.
I cant say anything against update stability so it is overall 2 Stars instead of 1.2. Everyone has their own opinion so please judge for yourself if you want to read it or not.What you can expect from this novel isA lot of different names for one person or thing (translation fault)Illogican things like taking out a top treasure like nothing that should not be there but out of nowhere everyone knows what it is and they have seen it bevore in their treasury even though in the complete town there is not a Single treasure that comes even close. Scenes that don't make sense like breaking of Engagement usw. A dumb mc that curses the heavens for not getting a golden finger and can't hold his own oaths, besides taking out a top treasure in front of everyone is explanation enough. Besides Mc the rest of the characters don't really have a personality and only scold the mc or praise him. Now to the good things we have a mc that is transmigrated/reincarnated for those who like it and the system that is lucky draw based just so happens to give him EVERYTHING he needs at the moment (wait I think that is a Bad point) weil just stop it there I didn't read long enough to be able to take out the good points so please take them out yourselves.
I like the novel so far. Very entertaining and fun to read. The novel develops at a steady pace. there are no over explanations that brake you out of the story, which many novels sadly do. I am looking forward to reading the novel till it's completion. I just hope it won't become a harem. It will ruin the story. A lot of authors should take this novel as an example of how writing is done correctly. Keep up the great work. Hope you enjoyed writing it as much as i loved reading it.
The story has a good path thats has many optional path it could go! Seems like MC going to be doing some early gains in his child hood and I wish to see his age progression gradually over chapters onward... but to many reader that would get tedious for them so if Author could do 1-1# to the beginning! Some highlight reel of family moments and parental shenanigans!
1:03 PM 0.0KB/s (I) 11$ 4GI 221 Review Detail miwaknight IN, ***** LTE • • • a few seconds ago I was so engrossed in reading your book that I almost forgot to look at the time! This definitely deserves a 5/5 star rating. It had me hooked from the very beginning. The writing is strong and solid, the unique flow of it definitely makes you want to keep reading. With every introduction of a new character, comes along an intriguing backstory that keeps you on your toes and and leaves you yearning for more. I was only able to read a few chapters but this would be the only book in my collection that I'll be reading for the time being. Not gonna lie, I absolutely loved it and I will definitely read more. You're doing great, author! My eyes are definitely set on your book. Keep up the good work!
This is an astonishingly good novel which insights curiosity, love and mystery. Feel free to try.......
author spirit, always healthy and good luck. ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????
It is the story called red packet server with a different tittle thats all. Not a fanfic or anything just pure copy paste of the original other than again the tittle.
PLEASE ADD MORE I absolutely adore this series it’s got everything you could possibly want, OP MC, game lit style, system, reincarnation this is amazing
A VR Game! A Mage! Finally, Beautiful Characters!!Author tried to elaborate the story in a way that readers could understand, and although I could see some mistakes, it's still kept at bare minimum.Best Wishes to Author! ?
