' Ohhh ? Alchemist Lao it appears that you know my disciple here, may I know where you two met before ? '
Sadly, it seemed like August paid their looks no attention, but Albus wasn't too upset about it, sitting down and enjoying her surroundings instead. August and Mandy talked about something complicated which Albus felt she should understand, but she honestly had no clue.
Even as Stigma looked at Emily, she only responded by shaking her head, implying that she was not aware of such matters.
"I feel so happy and everything seems to be… like a dream… A dream that I never want to wake up…" She said as she then stared at the gentle and loving man beside her with glaze eyes.
"Excuse me, but shouldn't I be the one who decides whether or not an apology is necessary?"
Considering how demanding and not to mention how unlawful the gang members act and operate, they were stuck in a hard place.
good novel author. you story has potential to grow. and it's hyping with just a few chapters that I've red and it has a wonderful storyline and background coming from the perspective of mine a free reader . I hope you don't drop your story I'll always be reading your updated chapters praying for your good health mentally and physically ??✌️
It was a pleasant read. I liked the romance.
i know you can do better , wish you good luck on your novel
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
I didn't catch up yet but I see potential in this novel. I am not native so I gave 5 because I can easily understand it. The world is complex and actually, I think after reading more chapters I will try to improve my novel world hahaha. I will try to update the review when I read more chapters but it's ending of my semester so I cannot promise it now. Good luck!
I'm not a great reader but this novel made me a very loyal reader. It's lightly written and it has a unique writing style. It's almost like you're watching it.I love it and I really hope it gets the recognition it deserves.Made me laugh and cry and it has this mysterious aura that keeps you hooked.A few punctuation modifications are needed, but it's weird how little that matters as events keep shocking you xDKeep it up!