Really great start, Has Potential ?.
Will the author still continue this book? It's really good though. It's been awhile since a story fascinated me so much.
Hi Everyone,Shameles Author here. Beware its a slow paced novel. Also its my first one so any constructive criticism is highly welcome
Ahh yes, the canonical reviewing your own book... Pulling a GuiltyThree here. My intentions with this book is to write a story of survival, uncovering secrets and learning from the failures of both others and yourself, at the least. My plan may change so expect the unexpected. There will be at least one love interest and/or romantic relationship - hence the romance tag. However this will be later in the series I think, allowing our main character time to prepare a bit (Trust me he needs it). As the plot progresses, so will several internal themes within the main characters head.Expect violent adventures, desperate hunts for knowledge and when despair is most potent: the hope to reach the end by death or success.
it's a good novel, one of a kind. hope to see more in the future
Where do I begin? If you haven't already begun to read this, then what are you waiting for!?At the time I was writing this, I was able to reach chapter 14, but I was so impatient about writing a review that I decided to write one before catching up to the current chapter.Let's begin with writing quality.The writing quality is superb. Each paragraph would always be so descriptive and immersive to read. I had not seen anything big that would be able to disturb my immersion.For stability of update, I believe that even since starting this novel, the author had constantly been outputting 1-2 chapters each day.Now for the last three. Story Development: the story itself is going well so far; of course, I can not say as much as I want to, considering I have yet to catch up.The Character Design & Development, as well as the world background. The character designs are fantastic, and the development so far seems to be flowing pretty well.Each character has a charming personality of their own, which is not the case in many novels nowadays. My favourite is currently Yuki.The world background: since the world is still in its early stages (I believe), I don't currently expect anything big to suddenly appear. But I'm sure it will be revealed later on, so go read it for yourself!Overall, a 4.8 stars for as (most likely a five star once I progress through the story more XD) Fully Recommended!
very good book... from start to finish amazing
I want to keep reading but everything is always behind a paywall. The raw translation is complete trash too.
I can't believe I haven't left a review for this lovely novel ??u200d♀️??u200d♀️ so sweet and filled with so much love ?? thank you for your hard work author and I can't wait to continue supporting you ??
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