This is indeed a treasure to me. I am incredibly envious of the profound love depicted in the story; growing up with six cousins who were like brothers, I've never experienced such an intense emotion. The novel has ignited within me a desire to find that one special person to whom I can pour my heart out and protect them wholeheartedly. I've fallen deeply in love with this book. Initially, it took about ten chapters for me to fully appreciate it, but once I did, I couldn't put it down, devouring 41 chapters in one sitting.
As I progress, my affection for the story grows stronger. The main character's charm and captivating personality win me over. At first, the plot was dark, with people trying to eliminate him, which led to him faking his own death to escape. However, the narrative transforms as the protagonist gains strength and power, leaving others speechless, making it an enjoyable read. I'll be right back.
The storyline is decent - a light and heartwarming tale with minimal conflict. However, I deducted stars due to glaring plot inconsistencies and the evident immaturity in the writing. To be honest, it's not terrible, but it has the potential to be far superior. At the 84th chapter, my frustration led me to pen this review. It's peculiar how the original female lead (FL) was seemingly forgotten so effortlessly; she's only briefly mentioned here, despite the need for clarification about her relationship with the male leads. It's strange how everyone suddenly distances themselves from her upon the arrival of the new FL. While I acknowledge the focus on the new soul and the novel's main plot, the abrupt abandonment of the original FL feels unjustified. Apart from a single instance where the new soul intervenes to stop bullying, her character is largely absent, creating a significant plot hole. If you prefer simple narratives and stories centered around a female protagonist being showered with attention from multiple men, this might pique your interest.
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Naming scheme is distracting AF. Couldn't get past more than ten chapters without it getting unbearable. His name used to sound like Lois Griffin from Family Guy, and now his reincarnated name sounds like creepy celebrity Jared Leto. 75% of each chapter is just a solipsism-filled monologue about some bs where he breaks the 4th wall and constantly addresses the reader directly. Maybe 2 things happen for each hundred words inside his head where he's either complaining or infodumping.
can u say the name of that novel??
If I may ask what are those plot holes?
I caught up :'<, does anyone have a recommendation of some similar genre to this one, I really like weak to strong and have system like power
Mmmm... I see, I remembered your pfp
It's because some of the chapters are labeled as decimals. Example: 13.1, 13.2 etc.
I really can't stand the violent in the first chapter so i drop it. Pls give me a heads up if you find this novel worth to try.
The story is not bad overall. But the way the ML is acting towards FL who is 15 or 16 feels like he's a p3do. And whatmore, yes. we hate the villainess sister but to include r*pe towards her and her accompany who were underage as a revenge plot just to make the readers satisfy is just too much.
I might as well drop this. cuz of underage r*pe.