Awesome novel ! Great action ! Maybe writing this review for the xp. Maybe not lol. Or maybe yes. Or maybe not. Or maybe yes. Or maybe not. Or maybe yes. 140 characters achieved haha ! But legit , it is worth the read from what I've seen.
Hello, a few words from the authorThis is a slow-paced story, please be patient with :) and this is a rework of my second novel Tribe Online.since this is a game novel, I will try to balance 40% time within the game, 40% time about his real life, and the remaining 20% is about competitive scene, e-sport, and others. I will try to balance it like this.Criticisms are welcomed, but sometimes (or maybe most of the time) people think that sh*t-talking is being "harsh" to critic the author while actually, it's not a criticism, you are being rude. I will delete such a review if there's one. thanks and hope you enjoy the story.
Given the prospect as well as potential it will be long one, but will you be dropping it in the middle? Otherwise reading a downgraded version of the overgeared and even not complete wil be waste of time
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A novel to add to the reading list. Not great, but not too bad either.
Hi. Pls read ty. <3 Yes, I'm reviewing my own work, but as the great Muramasa-sensei once said, an author should always give their book a 100 so that's what I'm going to do. Well anyways, I'm still surprised someone had already reviewed it?
the synopsis is like chinese novel i have read, mc have mysterious technique and betrayed by his disciple after that attacked by 7 or more people and reincarnatet in the body of servant of young miss
Normally, I would not be so invested in this story because it has all the cliches and overused themes a typical Chinese novel has.But it is charming and addictive in its own way. You would not find yourself bored with the story, as it has enticing points that satisfies you in some manner. Though do get ready for a lot of face-slapping, as this story has a lot of that.
I'll be honest I'm rating it 5 because I'm hoping you will continue this book and keep it going although its been awhile since an update I sincerely hope you can keep this story going or because not only is it good ( a lot of people like r18 scenes as well just saying) but it also has an interesting way of developing I'll be waiting for updates I hope you have a good day by the way and happy thanksgiving
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Really liking where the novel is going. Loving the lightweight story but having firm step in development.I'm really craving for a mass release for this one.
It was good in the beginning but after reaching chapter 100+ or around chapter 180+ the author just repeat the info and stuffs again and again then it start losing the "Merchant" premise in the story as all that is happening is fight then buys stuffs and improve his feys then fight again.