i am very happy that author thought of continuing it ! i am going to support it with all my heart , best wishes for the author, good things comes sudden !! ?
This is my my novel on sport genre. If there are any mistakes or concerns, please feel free to point them out. Thank you.
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I like pretty much everything in the novel but, it takes quite a while for the updates. just some random words for length: asdfbnbgferthjuytrewqaswdfgthjk
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It was good at first but it became total boring after that I don't know but when there is no circumstances in the story, it should at list be a funny story. I don't know... its just my oun perspective
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So far, probably the best trial read among the lot. I know, not really saying much - but if you have to add a novel to the list, might as well be this one.It's actually not all that bad - the MC's cheat is that he's the only one who has access to a shop, but the prices are at market rate (even though that's impossible with prices fluctuating from place to place and depending on scarcity, but this is a webnovel, so just go with it) and he has to purchase points with real money or gold from in the game. He can purchase things to move his cultivation forward, but he needs to take risks to get the money he needs, so it actually works out.I like the character - he seems interesting in that he's not your usual Xianxia murderhobo. Some things are contrived - like him completely blanking and not paying attention when the young mistress of the house he's working for starts speaking, meaning he missed important information. Similarly, he doesn't realize he's already been targeted by the mastermind he found information on (since the person who attacked him could well have been doing so to silence witnesses), so his reasoning for not ratting him out completely fell apart and he doesn't even know it.Not bad, is what I'm saying. I'd actually be willing to follow this when it comes out of trial read - which is something I can't say for every other option in the trial read. If this wasn't webnovel, I'd rate it as 3.5-4 star, but given webnovel's inflated ratings, 5 stars seems fine.
One word to describe the novel is "Random". Everything is so random like the author wrote it without thinking or giving any considerations for the plot.
IN A NUT: Pathetitic MC gets a SYSTEM when he falls into the depths of despair... And starts preparing for the coming DOOMSDAY !REVIEW: The summary which caught your attention , has never happened, yet! System requires RMB to work.. personally I wish if the MC was smarter! he buys blades and guns- but donno how ot use them!! he should've concentrated on personal strength, rather than external strength initially!! it is still an awesome novel! thanx for the chapters AND KEEP'EM COMING!!
I don't know much about the story yet, but I can see a potential in the plot. Some punctuation errors around the dialogues can be improved with a little editing. Keep writing :)