It's a very safe book for anyone who wants to start reading danmei, as there aren't too many characters to keep track of. also, at least for someone who doesn't know jack*** about science, it sounds really convincing. overall great book, no complaints.
Writing Quality - It started a bit weird and you could find places where characters spoke very unnaturally to give the readers information. However I didn't see it again after the first few chapters, so I think the author paid attention to criticism and improved. The author's writing style mixes comedy and humor with precision; it's not too much, it's not too little, and it's placed at the right times. Updates - seems like a stable one chapter per day.Story development - you will need some patience. It's heading in a great direction, but it takes a while for the MC to learn about the unknown world he had woken up into.Character Design - the MC has a practical personality, and he doesn't try to be a hero. I personally like this type of MCs, so I liked him.World Background - post-apocalypse world, it's executed really well and I can't wait to for the secrets behind it to be revealed.
Wow! Compared to quite a number of books I've read, this one has an astonishing begining. The tension is thick, dark yet captivating. Good work author, thumbs up on the descriptions.Keep it up.
Extremely well-written as card style novels such as the way in which this one is written requires either an enormous memory or a really really long notepad document. 5-stars across the board.
The story is awesome and I believe that the start is quite great. Keep on writing.. I will be waiting for new chapters... The imagery can be improved a bit tho...
The story is impeccable, I truly think that it has the capability to rival EPIC
Character ✅ Storyline ✅ World background ✅... In my own opinion, the book good, interesting, and also need little bit of corrections. On that note, if you're a fan of an erotic, succubus, supernatural themed story, then 'My journey with a succubus' is definitely a book you should read. Go ahead and try it, you'll love it.
It's a very unique take on a concept done too many times already. Somehow, reminds me of the living Divine Weapons in the Soul of Searing Steel. Living Weapons are meant to be used by the wielder they are capable with, whatever the goal of wielder might be. This novel has a lot of potential, I am currently on Ch3. After I catch up to the author, I am gonna update this review again.
Though the characters are too many, the developed really well and I learned to love or hate each one. The world they are in felt too real. I hope this gets even more exciting as the story goes......
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your story is so good. your grip on your plot is really marvellous. your every dialogue is unique or real. in short, totally different style.
I was really scared while reading the book.