[AN: The villagers don't have family name or things like that]
but ther was no way invisible dragon would let him live
Two chapters out as of this reading.I can tell the author has a good sense of prose and narrative pacing. The technical side of this is good and has few errors. The reading is slightly inhibited by symbol use, but that is more an aspect of WN not providing basic tools like italics and bolding to new writers. That can be corrected in time.Overall, a decent start.
When is this book go be done and who the love interest
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Uma das melhores novelas daqui, não é nada clichê apesar do começo
worst novel just info dump.i have read 100 plus chps but still just info dump you can't even get the basic outline of the world just don't waste your time like me .
______________________________________________________________________________________________________.I Like fasion books But when mc becomes to entranced in fashion or has a dress he just can't finish for likke 100 chapters it becomes annoying so I reccomend going on like you currently are and if someone puts you down then say F%ck you. And troll them
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Writing Quality: 4/5Stability of Updates: 4/5Story Development: 3/5Character Design: 1/5World Background: 4/5This story is one of better written fanfics on this site and the system is easily understandable yet quite advanced compared to others while the storyline feels a little too much of a copy paste of original so far it's goodThe one and only problem for the story is a massive one, the mc is absolute trash, there's no redeeming qualities from him so far at ch34I really want to continue reading this but I can't, it's too frustrating seeing our mc having such a massive amount of resources available to him yet he acts like a fucking retard and fucks around and almost gets himself killed, let me guess, he'll look right into the basilisk eyes later just for the lols or something, that's how retarded he is, he threw a fucking rock cake on a troll and then proceeded to try to dodge the swings instead of you know actually using fucking magic
Great book, great writing and superb character development. This novel is captivating and gripping, I usually don't read this kind of book, but this one is attention-grabbing, with excellent Idea and plot.
The characters are good and the story is nice.But the world is very badly created.The author hardly talks about the world, just follows the protagonist's life, doesn't care about anything about it.