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Writer u are shameless but one of the best pervert author with good writing skills .This novel is gonna be good. Ty?????u200d❤️u200d?u200d??u200d❤️u200d?u200d?Writer u are shameless but one of the best pervert author with good writing skills .This novel is gonna be good. TyWriter u are shameless but one of the best pervert author with good writing skills .This novel is gonna be good. TyWriter u are shameless but one of the best pervert author with good writing skills .This novel is gonna be good. Ty
Harems=bad.
All was good so far at the start but the story contradiction and mc is well the best full of ****.....one of the most craps it ruining the world you writing the story base on and put other world in it to make it more of a ***** crap.....you writing style os good but you brain process for this is story is well not even considerable.....good luck for the future development so you make a good mc and world BASED story to not ruin the world story with crao developments.....
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Too generic. World building? Just invent things as you go on.MC is also a typical chinese MC. Hide my power. Blend in the crowd. No thoughts about not being a slave. He just goes on with flow. Its an afk wish fulfilment novel where MC is the only one with 2 braincells. Rest of them have only 1.
The fact that I was just searching for VR novels, and this came rushing just at the right time. And I love how it is super realistic, and also the main character has a stable mind and doesnt rush immediately to kill mobs is 5 stars for me :>>
The novel has a huge potential, there are some writing mistakes but the world background and the possibilities of the novel are limitless, hope the author will not rush the novel and continue on a steady pace
: I am loving the chapters you're posting bro. The world development is good and the characters are freaking amazing. I would like lots and lots of chapters in the future. It has limitless potential. Keep up the good work ?
I gotta say the Art cover looks nice, Can you give us context regarding what's on that Art Cover. P.S. I miss the old Saber..ehem, Dawn cover.
Psycho MC and the characters are as flat as in other check in novels. This is a skip....................................................................
To start the review off, I will say that this the same author who wrote "Strongest Abandoned Son