This is one of the best originals I've seen on this site and everyone should try to read it. That being said there are two major faults with worldbuilding I'd like to point out. This shouldn't stop anyone from trying it, though.First, the money. This new world works like a tribal society. There's no agreement between tribes or races to enforce the usage of gold and silver as currency. No one trusts one another, humans and non-humans. There's no reason for gold and silver to be accepted as currency to the whole world. At best it could maybe be traded by weight in gold, but even that is fickle. People need survivability, not precious metals from Earth that should have no value there.The worst is that the author had the perfect plot device to avoid using gold: Essence. If people could exchange Essence between them, there is no reason for gold and it's pretty clear that, plot wise, essence is meaningful for everyone, no matter the race, and universally acceptable.Second: Manuals. The world has a system where characters can level up stats or get skill from monsters they kill, using 'Essence'. Yet, the author added books that the MC would find and learn techniques, Wuxia-style.That really didn't go well with his system plot. It would be far better for them to be regular skills from the system. Like the dagger technique he got by killing a bandit, for example, instead of a book the character should have a chance to gain the skill of the target, monster or human, this way he would have only the skills the Author wants him to have in the end. Like I said, overall this is a very good novel, but these two points stuck like a sore thumb for me. I'd even advise the author to rewrite them. It'd be a pain, but worth the hassle.
This is a nice novel! The story development is not slow and not too fast. So far, every chapter has something that actually happened. Not like some novels where some chapters will just focus on his/her thoughts. I look forward to how the story goes. This is actually worth my stone. Too bad it's not included for voting.
Surprisingly Good. I admit that I kinda didn't liked the story first, but the following chapter really got my interest. Although the story little slow it has great potential.Mainly the chakra and the elemental powers. Its fascinating. That's why my expectations for this story is higher as well other works. Good Luck!
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This book is amazing, keep going!Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
its bad not worth for it to be picked and story is okay some cliche but translation is barely passable and the emotions are too much they look artificial not a true looks like a newbie writer maybe he/$he improved but the first 40 chapters are barely ok
Great history just a bit to much into the *** part but still great its a must read one of my favorites right now keep up the good work im waiting alot from this
Ah friend Recommends this novel to me. And I got to say, it's really good. The story is easy to read, as well as to understand. The story progression I think is going swell. The grammar could be better but I think that gives it a charm to it, a beginner writer charm. If I was to rate it I would rate it 9/10.Posted at 29th chapter.
Overall it isn’t a bad novel but when you only release 40 chapters and the novel is based on using a fusion system and the system doesn’t get used till 40 chapters in and that is also when the updates stop this deserves a negative star
Hello Author here. Gonna shamelessly give 5 for my work. Do have a try. Looking at the beginning, seems as action, a pinch of drama, with one teaspoon of maybe romance and a bowl of mysteries. With further chaps, the other genres comes into play, with some surprises. Still in the stage of development. So the chap release may take a little more time. Will work on it to improve the chaps.P.S: Comment and share your suggestion, So I can rectify some errors I might have Missed.
Every MC is OP ,but that doesn't mean everyone wants to read an OP MC story. But OP doesn't mean MC should be OP from the start, if you're not writing a parody Fanfiction. I Know I'm being unreasonable here but I still want the content to improve far more. It has potential don't waste it.?
Garbage totally garbage everything is nothing but garbage. The MC just keep on making stupid choices. Garbage i tell you. To Summarize it's Garbage.