just here to review for a fastpass event
looking forward to reading it the synopsis seems good
review is here a.......................
I really love the whole idea of the bookit's quite disappointing to see it's not been updated as I'd love to see more
What i am about to write... doesn't necessarily mean i say its bad ar something just that it hurts my head a little...you should read the novel regardless and form your opinion..as i am sure that it's rating maybe isn't only for show and my opinion might even be wrong and i am missing something...Now ThenMan... anything just doesn't make sense to me ..in this novel...Mc was supposed to lose humanity..or something but actually other than race change there were no side effects..he is just a typical mc..is he some hero of justice ??? ,he helps everyone he sees bullied...and shit like that..?? i wouldn't have any problem with these settings if the mc wasn't shown to be like a broken guy...also that the author created such a drama about him losing humanity...He ate the DEVIL'S FRUIT surely other than race change (that too only in name..) there must be some side effects.. Right???NO.. Nothing ... sigh*Also....dude just how many skills,classes and abilities are there?? everyone's stats and mana also over 1000000s..like you can't even remember all of the skills and abilities...and other things (DON'T BLAME MY LOW IQ...ok... just don't.... its definitely not my problem..no jokes*) Many times you won't even know where the fight is happening...cuz mc and his new poke...i mean partner fight in an inn..that too a low class inn ..lot of cliches too..well that's not the main problem as they don't go far beyond by brain capacitymany stupid things...like the mc wastes his time during the fight ice guy where he could gave died if ice guys sister interviened and his sister didn't even kill the mc...who i am sure will be a future problem for her...typical The joseph guy..could have caught the mc but didn't even chase..i mean ok he might have thought that the opposite party is only hostile to others not him... should atleast have captured him..or tried...( I don't think tht the mc could have escaped..due to a power level difference of what..over 900..cough* cough* i mean over 500+...levels?The Mc looks for slaves..which i thought he did because he can't trust any one but Noooo...he just freed them..to gain their TRUSTHe should have learned that he cannot trust others...cuz he got ditches by the king..and all....but no..His.. childhood friend...well just forget her Ohhh Right....he has a system...which probably everyone forgot by now atleast i only remembered during writing ( AGAIN DON'T QUESTION MY IQ)....theres a lot but my head will...blast
A very interesting concept and overall fun/unique idea but the story feels a bit rushed to the point that what should have been a 30 chapter arc is finished in 2 chapters leaving the reader having trouble feeling attached to any passing characters or place the mc is surrounded by at the time. Unfortunately the writing is very inconsistent and erratic for the most part as well on top of a lot of grammatic errors. I feel as a first draft this has promise but needs to be restarted and thoroughly planned out along with a good editor. But as of it's current condition I can't keep reading the story. Best of luck to the author and editor.
I'm sad to say that the original felt so much better to read, and although this version gave more information into his mother's past. It convoluted the leveling system and just made the reading aquard. I pray the author will either continue the original or do another rewrite because this one isn't worth reading
The pacing of the story is unrealistic and rushed. And the main character feels undervelop and lacks personality.When I first saw that this novel was about hunter x hunter I was realy excited, however i quickly realized that my excitement was fir nothing. By combining a epic manga and similarly epic novel it only causes the novel to be bloated by surplus of concepts. Ultimately this does not feel like a hunter x hunter novel, but instead reads as your standard broken system cultivator novel.
Love this book, I am broke with coins now after unlocked all the chapters with my coins, but it's worthy! Have added the book to my collection!
It is evident that the author's first language is not English, however, they have done an impressive attempt in writing this novel, so a well done to them. There is a delicate and nice balance between dialogue and description, which is tricky to achieve. I would say that there are moments where the description is rushed and incomplete, there is so much more potential in captivating the reader's imagination, the author just needs to tweak this. Otherwise, a good start.
I liked this web novel and the original is one of my favourites, however, for some reason the author stopped updating the story, hopefully he's not dead or anything
Now. In at not be TheStatsGuy or TheImmortalPotato, but I can tell you a few things.This is one of the most original and refreshing books I have ever had the pleasure of reading。So, take my word when I tell you that this book has everything a novice reader, or a bored pro can look for. You may not like it at first like I did, but just read 10 chapters in. I can gauruntee you will get hooked, I’ll bet 666 Spirit Stones on it.