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The book is okay. Pretty middle of the road. There are good points, like the world building however the flow feels wonky and a bit jumpy and the grammar whilst decent compared to some of the novels on here, alongside the flow make it pretty hard to read. But I do believe there is a good amount of potential, the author definitely needs some practice as it can be a little boring and the characters a bit odd. Like he's in India, why exactly is he called Nix? His friend Nagendra should never be that calm in an accident, no matter who you are there is always an initial panic and worry.
This is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind.Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done wellHope author will keep writing.Fuck 140 word ****This is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind.Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done wellHope author will keep writing.This is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind.Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done wellHope author will keep writing.This is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind.Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done wellHope author will keep writing.This is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind.Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done wellHope author will keep writing.vThis is great so far. Gonna delete the review if i change my mind.Mc looks sensible, has some good humour, pacing is done wellHope author will keep writing.
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This novel is pretty good.Author, kindly consider writing a part 2 for this novel.------------------------------------------------------
nice novel. it can be a little more systematic or their power levels can be understood. If the variables are better integrated into the story, it would be a great series.
I love how you designed the characters. Most of the time our lives change but if we don't take control life ends up changing us sometimes even to all sorts of worst kinds. You got everything well portrayed. Keep it up!
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