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this novel is really mind blowing. I hope the update would be up the pace .very exciting, educative and inspiring.i would like to read more books from this Arthur
Astrength is his inclusion of specifics about the strength growth and the beatsmen. Most authors do not include hard operating numbers and advice in a narrative book. He does and it is extremely useful information. .I found those detailsare comparable in less words to books I have read devoted entirely to running the business.He nails it on the head when talking about going the extra mile for your guests. His philosophy and stories reminded me of Nordstrom’s commitment to unexpected service, even when it isnot even related to the core business.Summary: Worth the read.
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I like it. one of my favourite sports novel. Keep it up.
Umm.. MC's a Mega Simp.. Battles are bad.. Time is Inconsistent..All I've Learnt is that.. CEO's = Winner.. 1 Person cannot Beat 1000+ in this Power System..MC.. no matter what he can do.. CEO's have 500+ People to give him Power..MC sees a great Path but, hesitates to choose a weak Path..Can Divinate his Future!! but, Only checks 1 Cave at a time!?Can Literally Become OP with Divination.. The Power to see Multiple Futures.. Test people's Loyalty, Directions to Power/Resources, Enemies Locations, Plan for Perfect Outcomes..Can Learn How to do Anything --> His Futures can learn the Mistakes so his Present will Only have the Best Results.. (Future Versions Cultivates 1,000,000,000 Faulty Methods for Present Version to Get TOP 1000 Perfect Methods for Free)
author I just realised something you can try to improve on or maybe you have in later chapters since in currently at 260+. The sentences or rather the way the characters speak is too formal, sometimes it feels cringy and automated, no one speaks the way they do with so many words, the way to speak and the wordings don't feel natural. I'm very adept at English (even though I know it' may not be your first language) and the conversations feel like I'm reading a Shakespeare book most times. for example in chap 278 when Alex finds out about artemias plan to use him, what he says in reply to her question was honestly just too long with so many unnecessary words in between, it's even worse for artemias reply. You should try making the way they speak more natural, using common informal English lingo and having less words while still passing the message across. Just think about contemporary English (American/British) movies and series and ask your self, if these lines were to be acted out , would they sound off to a listener/watcher or would they sound so smooth it wouldn't even look like acting, would anyone speak this way casually with so many tedious words?. I think that'll help.
Amazing story, lots of good interactions between the mc and the side characters. Everything generally seems like its fits within the story. However the biggest issue with this story has to be the alters as they came out of nowhere and they honestly take away more from the story than they add. Honestly if they just suddenly disappeared in any of the chapters than I’d be happier.
just trashchecked ahead on MTL novels just plain garbage . .
The capture of racist bullying in the opening passages was really done well. The self-talking and the acceptance of getting bullied were eerily relatable to me?.But there are quite a few problems. Hope you don't get me wrong. I kindly wish you to correct some grammatical issues in your writing. And keeping multiple dialogues of multiple characters together in a single passage could impact the reader (saw it on a review for another work ages ago)Otherwise, it's a good story and has some strong characters with great potential. All the best?
Beautiful! Absolutely Beautiful! I am a fan of clear writing, with the capturing of proper details and an inviting edge that keeps the audience begging for the relief of thrill.I must say that this is a work of art. You know sometimes, true Horror is not the monster in the closet. But the one in the mind. Truthfully, this book calls him out. truly beautiful...
Not the average storyline you'd find in most books. I love how the story has been developing. However I feel like there is still a room for improvement esp personalization of characters. They're sounding like one most of the times.