This book has the most exposition I’ve ever seen in a story before. So, so much spoon-fed information that we didn’t need, along with strange naming of characters and countries and completely unrealistic behavior of people and society. Might be the world world building I’ve ever witnessed. I had high hopes.
It looks promising, the character gives me an Overlord vibe. Taking your other works into account, I am excited on this one.
Quite a good book with an interesting Mc, Fml, and other characters.
The writing quality while not perfect is better than the majority on this sight, but perhaps this is just my opinion.
Story development definitely not fast but interesting as I can see a great picture growing in the background.
Stability should be more than now, but we can only hope the author will increase updates.
All in all, I recommend everyone to at least try it as I don't feel it is a waste of time at all.
I LOVE THIS BOOK ITS AWESOME!!! I JUST WISH HE COULD GET A SECOND PET AND BE ANOTHER DRAGON THAT WOULD BE AWESOME!!
For the moment gonna leave this as a 4 until theres more, but for now I can safely recommend this. It's a bit too early for a 5 until I see some of the answers behind things like what his system really is and what the other system users are, etc, but im into it so far.
This book is amazing! I love the good use of English and Grammar . The description is ?? and the storyline is wonderful! A very great read. Hoping for more chapters . Ride on author!
They are true as their names:-#Devil: but not an evil!Embedded as a cold hearted devil but has a soft heart not to harm any innocent even after betrayal. Has his own fare share of guilt to burn himself in, but live for the people he cares and love but never shows.#Our FL: as innocent as a bunny ? (but don't forget bunny bites if being teased ?). Who's character is still to be build and features to be shown. Naive, innocent but not a fool.Side characters are lovable, you crave for their presence.. and laugh on a certain someone's mumbling enough to bring tears to eyes.Now, curiosity is killing me how this novel is related to WAD (Witch's Daughter and the Devil's Son)I was never in love with any character ever to write or comment about them as I do for devil(s) created by you.
When I started reading this book then, I thought it's a book that won't last and just stop before reaching a thousand chapters, similar to other books. Fortunately, the author proof me wrong and the book gets more interesting as it cross the thousand. @ author, since we reached the last volume, how many chapters should we be expecting more before the book finally gets it's ending? How does the affect the mc and his harem? Would it be similar to other books that just rush to finish the book or will you proof me wrong again, unlike others, that this book will have a befitting ending.
The plot twists are really interesting, and I love how it's based on Jay yet it's not really based on him at the same time.I'm very excited to see what other twist we're going to have.
Lots of grammar and spelling mistakes. Sentence construction is also not great. So 2 for Writing quality.
Not sure about the updating stability as I don't follow the novel...
Look as far as the novel goes apart from the writing, is very avarege. The OCs are mostly generic and the mc is basically templated. I feel like there also some developments wich are unlikely but that can be glossed over by this just being a fantasy novel of that style and the world is obviously so that's still good even though there issue's when comparing the logic of characters and their abilities to the original world.
Where are you Daoist RaLegacy? It was thanks to this forbidden text that I was able to enlighten my spear to peak virility! If only the text had been complete, then my secret move "profound thrusts" would have been one with the Dao... Anyway, Daoist brother I hope you are living well and you are not under the pressure of life's tribulations.I like the story. Still do... #Updatemore
This looks quite promising. It's as very interesting novel. I love it . It just need enough viewers who actually rate it. This is only hell of a book and the background the way everything is really promising and if