I like your story but sad to say i didn't read that much because i didnt have that much time but don't worry I love your story so I will definitely spare some time to continue reading it.[img=recommend]
Already 300+ chapters on Otaku translations... Should probably go read it at the source, more content and supports independent translators...
I had a very fun time reading this story and everything was laid out great. I didn't have trouble reading anything and I like the plotline. Good job author keep it up!
starting from the first chapter where the main character is an 80 year old man looking for his love, this is just an attempt to catch up on drama and this is stupid since this is fanfiction. I think new life new opportunities is a good motto. Not to mention that the main character is too strong from the very beginning and there is no feeling of overcoming obstacles. And because of the power of khaki and others, it becomes impossible to immerse yourself in the atmosphere of TDG. As an author, I may wish to learn from mistakes.
Hello, Welcome. :)
For your information, if The Adamant Map has been completed, you can see it as a reference when reading this story.
Thank you for your attention.
Well, the idea was good.. kind of.
3 1/2 chapters in, and it was already kind of unbearable. It just seems like you have no clue what you’re doing, and need some time to improve.
You want the main character to be sarcastic so bad that it just comes off as cringey, and this whole thing where the boys and school are picking fights over a girl, and even crying when they see her with the MC is quite honestly just gross, and unrealistic.
SUGGESTION: READ THE REVIEWS BEFORE READING THE STORY SO AS NOT TO SPREAD TOO MUCH HATE AND INSULTS ON THE BOOK AND MC LATER( LIKE I DID).
those are the comments i wrote hope they ll make u understand a bit about the mc mentality:
"...aizz i just need to know if he ll change his stupid belief or find a compromise because as he is now he s just AN idiot.
not saying he should go around killing women but to not even touch them while brutally handling men(like literally almost causes two men to force each other)...that s ridicoulous and make him much more of a shut in edgelord that takes women as something sacred(mega simp) than he would have been behaving normally"
"...i ve seen ur review now
moral compass is absolutely flawed as his thought process is not normal as u commented.
for the typos and ecc u barely notice them as i focus more on the story than the grammar itself .
still while it presents an interesting(?) new approach to some, for many others the story just gets impossible to immerse in as i said before his thought process is not something many can immerse in unless u a shut in, that idolizes women with anime girl pillows and figurines."
if u still want to read it? good for u.
if not? glad i saved some of ur time.
Just wanted to ask, how is the chapter release like going forward? Irregular or set chapter release? Would really love it if you could do regular release! This novel is really good but i don't want the anxiety of not knowing when the next chapter is coming out, ya feel?
Yo Author here.
Rewriting this review after editing errors from previous chapters.
I should explain this before you guys think of starting this book.
The first volume will seem a little confusing, with a lot of unknowns happening.
But the second volume will be made specifically to reveal the mysteries before moving to the mc's reincarnation.
If you still have any questions about this book, feel free to ask and I'll answer to the best of my abilities.
Thank you.
Pretty good novel qnd Unique i realy love this. Updates are little bit unstable but you can survive. Also author use complicated words that i need to check on google what they meaning is. But overall good.
P.S. Read your selfs if wanna know the story
Fine if you read it in bulk with a turned off brain. The dedication to the translation is nice and well done.
I'M HERE well done to another great book