I dont know but i kinda feels sad for pei khan
As you know my writing isn’t that good[img=angry]
Good first chapter , the story sounds good but the synopsis needs a few changes ...good luck with your book.
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Wonderful story. For a military book, it doesn't come off as nationalistic. That's a big plus for me. Hope this doesn't change because it can be really off-putting at times.
Boring parody of Profane Prince of DominationIt took the author 200+ chapters to finish the story in the first city. (It was very boring)if you want a strong MC this book is not for you, you better re-read Profane Prince of DominationThe number of power stones shows that this is a very sad story.
writing style and grammar needs to improve but the story is enjoyable to read and you would want to know further story while reading so I hope author continue to write this novel for many more chapters.and i would like a mc who is more confident and clever and also true to his desire without hurting people...
The synopsis has many errors. This is a novel based on a VR game that merges with the real world at a later date. It is also in the year 2071. A typical OP MC video game protagonist who died after the worlds merged and was reincarnated back to when the game first came out. Using his knowledge of the game he becomes OP.Not for me as it is so cookie cutter you could bake an infinite amount of the same cookies with it.
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Story with huge potential. Hope to continue with same the momentum..............................................................................................................................
It's really good with minimal mistakes which makes it readable. I find the formatting to be clear as well which puts me in a good mood while reading. I will be sticking around to it and see after 50+ chapters how I feel about it.
I like the story, so far, it reminds me of "Slave Harem in the Labyrinth of the Other World" without the isekai. The only issue I have so far is the use of classes, they seem pointless, but the acquisition of some, so far, pointless skills.