I initially thought this was gonna be a novel where MC is a hermit that drinks pure spiritual blessed water casually then blows the minds of mortals as he casually serves it to them. On the contrary, this seems like an actual cultivation novel. He actually sequesters himself to cultivate or practice his skills/spells to mastery stages ect. This isn't a novel where the system is overbearing or seems to be constantly present either. It sometimes pops in to give a mission then leaves for a couple years or something. Characters are also one of this novels strong points, with them behaving as real actual humans would instead of being cardboard cutouts of that same arrogant young master.
Not what I was expecting honestly, but seems to be very well done and has that rare quality where some actual thought seems to be put in by the author.
Good grammar but the average " I'm bullied " cultivation story. The coin ability looks really nice which is why I wanted to give it a try but I simply can't. It just looks like the same old Chinese cliche. I would recommend those that are into " cultivation " to Defenitely give it a try. For those that aren't, I simply wouldn't bother.
A well done story better than many stories here on webnovel deserving more popularity. There are times that story seems like a high school drama, but I didn't mind it. Given their age, amnesia, and discovery of a new world puts a lot of pressure on the characters. You can feel the emotion and struggles of the characters as they fight to save a planet. All this happens in less than 1 month. The were always constant questions and mysteries the characters face that they slowly get unraveled over time.There are some grammatical errors but very little and do little to take away from the story. I felt fights were a weaker apart of the story along with the villains. After 800 years, they felt lax and not strong overall probably from arrogance? When facing multiple dark mages it felt like a 1v1 dueling style. The alpha felt like the weakest ones maybe due to not being able to control her powers?Overall, good story that deserves it's rating.
The story is good. I like how he calls himself king, when he obviously isn't all there is right now XD
The writing could use some work. Maybe get editing software? There are free ones. But story-wise, this is solid material. I'm adding it to my library :)
Keep doing the good work :)
My friend told me about this story. I thought it sounded interesting so I tried it. I got hooked instantly. Personally, I find the storytelling absolutely amazing. I believe that this is an amazing story. The MC is a devil. A little ruthless by human standards but he's not a coldblooded character who kills for no reason.
Overall, I'm glad this is the first book I found in this place. Keep it up.
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sorry to say this bro because i hate to be a bad guy. but your story pace is so slow and fighting is too slow and prolonged i feel like MC and every good guy is stupid and idiot beyond reason. you may enjoy a long and winding and slow and very very delayed battle but i sure not enjoy it. .i give honest star review at least, but for now i dropping your story for good
You are doing great, writer and the story seems very interesting. You will get more and more readers in the future. I wish you all the best for your book ❤️❤️. Everyone should definitely check this book out.
Its awesome so far can’t wait for the author to post more of the story. i also did Realize how long they actually want you to write out a review almost there gotta hit the max words and done.
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The basic premise of the novel follows the ascension of a transmigrator in the body of a bullied and belittled teaching intern in a cultivation world. Our MC is a former teaching head who transmigrates into this new world after an accident. His identity is that of a below average teaching assistant who is currently caught in the crossfire of a faction war in the school he's interning in, his fiancee is the headmaster and this puts him in a difficult position from the get go. He'll have to use his system and his wits to increase his reputation and save the school that he works for. Here are a few of my insights and impressions from the 60 chapters I read:- This novel has copious amounts of mob/petty antagonists and face slapping.- The face slapping is more verbal and quick witted than the usual, "I'll kill you and your nine generations
Good start and interesting novel to read. I hope there no NTR in the future the main character already suffer enough. I am kind interesting how main character going to deal with the other reincarnator.