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"Why do you have to be so pessimistic? It won't hurt to think about the future." he said as he kicked a rock on the path.
Wow, I just read the whole thing in a day! (Now I need to go do my chores)
This was all Mira thought as she stared at the horrifying flames that engulfed the world. Screams were everywhere, people were slowly turning to ash as they cry out for a savior in pain and anguish. They begged, begged, and begged yet no one came.
"Yes. I feel you," Mabel says. "Good thing we're all safe. And Vincent is now okay. I actually thought he would die…. I love Kriz so much! I wish we were sisters. We're all back to normal now. Thanks to Jeric…. He's really powerful."
For some reason it felt like I was talking to a child.
Normally, no one can ever perform such activities under the radioactive air without worrying about the risk of contamination. However, Alan had no qualm at all. From heat regulation, fitness elasticity to the unbreakable membrane, the Suit had almost anything that a Prime would need.
"These Creatures have seemingly come out of nowhere, obviously from beyond the 400 realms" Zither explained, "yet they can't be from the Outsiders led by Nyx, this just doesn't seem to be her style. She's the type to make a show of our extinction, additionally, it is beyond the Outsiders ability to mess with the Gates and you've already clarified that these creatures are not Irregularities. Our Gates are sacred tools given to us by the Creator, even we do not know how they function or why they choose us to be in the roles that we are in, but we all know that the only one who can truly instruct them is the Creator. And, I generally have a feeling that this is not from the Outsiders, and my feelings aren't usually wrong."
Ming Rushi's eyes widened. She had just killed her own child. Does this mean they have to take more innocent lives? At this point, she remembered how regretful it is not to have fled with Fu Bai.
This kind of story is really my favourite! The kind of story with OP mc.The writing quality is good but sometimes there's a bit of misspelled of word in a chapter anyway it's just like about one word in a chapter from 1-3 chapter in between.For the updates, that I don't know because I have just discovered this hidden gem and like always binge read xD.The development of the story is kind of fast paced but it just suited for this kind of OP MC so it's acceptable.The character design... Hmm... I think you make a great job on it.The world background is passable.That's all. Thank you. Keep up the good work and I hope it will be one of the best.
It starts very well, but after 30 chapters you already start to feel it getting short of breath, and by the time the premium arrived, I already had no interest while reading this novel anymore, I didn't even read the last free chapter, its base concept is pure genius but the more time passes the more the novel stays in conquered lands without trying to move on, the jokes are not changed, there is almost no evolution, and despite the plot advancing it feels like it doesn't, it would've been my favorite novel if the author had as much imagination as the first few chapters for the rest of the novel
She paled, "I can try but it won't last long."
