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I love the characters development, especially how Marie grew in novel...I sense she might get fully involved in drug dealing.Im a little disappointed im Rome.Also need to read more on annabel
Dear Author,Will our MC, Hierd, ever summon a "person," or has he not thought of that yet? But either way, this is a really good story, and I look forward to more of its development. Thank you for creating this story.
It shows great potential a lot of leading phrases that invoke curiosity and makes the reader want to come back a potential nail bitter and i like the world building
This is really a nice story to read, it is complex and the characters are 3 dimensional and they are not idiots.
Please stop taking other translators work and posting here thats so wrong.please dont be such a scumbag and all the people reading here please read it on original translators site
I can’t really tell if a romance novel is good or not since I don’t really read them. But this seems pretty it would probably get picked if it was a female lead but it’s male lead so it wont get picked
For now, I really liked the first 60 chapters ! Hoped I can read the following chapter soon ! The story seems good so far and easily read through
Hey everyone, it’s me the author. I’m popping here to apologise if my upload schedule is trash. Also all comments are appreciated. I will do my best to improve my style with feedback. Thank you for reading my story XD
I loved the story, all the character so far are well builded and even thought we are talking a military and war novel, we can see that the author knows that we need some drama, romance, comedy and relaxed times while reading a novel. The author so far sounds that he knows exactly what he wants about this novel, and this can change the quality of the novel by tenfold. Thank you for the good work
sometimes hard to follow yet riveting lots of twists and turns like a drug induced fever dream! feels like it could use another edit but might not need it
Writing QualityStability of UpdatesStory DevelopmentCharacter DesignWorld BackgroundThe total score5.0/////////////////////////////////
when new chapters are coming.author please upload it fast
