Let me go by saying I love op mcs and love when they're popular when its done right as for this... I tried to call chief and he told me to go away he already knows. Oh and pretty much every high voted comments in the first 50 chapters are all people hatting on the bad writing and plot so thats a thing.This is a story about a very stereotypical nerd who through the power of plot armor gets verbally s*ucked by every female, teasing girls one second to become a slave through a contract next because a female character talks nice to him, and then throws out his secrets like soup at a soup kitchen._-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-SPOILERS_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-So the main character becomes a blacksmith and is given a unbelievably broken ability and class that hes gonna use to become a real life superman. How you say? A magical ring he randomly finds on the ground that lets him go into a vrmmo can take items from in game to the real world. Sound stupid yet? Well dont worry with all the verbal $uck and very bad characters you wont have any idea whose who for a good 70% of all females. Jokes aside he has a entire guild giving him the verbal $uck and i cant tell the diffrence between any of the named ones besides the one that overly $*xualized and 85% of words have all been something about the mc being attractive.I digress the magic ring has to be upgraded either thru real items or in game items. Yet it can just snatch anything from the mc and force him to be a certain class yet was never given a explanation as to ehy the ring that gives him +20 luck at level 2 A Doesnt make him already super human(seriously he could but 10 lotto tickets and hes gurrented to win but he doesnt) and B why the mc gets stuck in any situation. The mc can literally run 3ms per step. Not second but everytime he moves his legs he jumps 3 meters yet hes as of chapter 58 getting locked down by some thugs who wouldnt be able to touch his coat(yes he has a fat friend but he could easily kill everyone around him by running and punching them in the neck no way he can't destroy everyone present). The next chapter hes being dragged down by 2 idoits and tgeir little sister eho apon seeing the mc has a sploosh as she claims hes KINDA CUTE and fights him. Now because he has SUPERHUMAN SPEED he trips her and could have let her fall cracker her skull but the mc is a good guy(+1) and catches her in the classic kiss pose which she goes in for. Very next chapter mc doesnt run away with his superspeed but some how gotten himself a stalker. Thats where i quit. Mc doesnt like whats going on and can damn near catch a car if he really tries in running but doesnt leave this situation its beyond me
This novel is being re translated as a new novel called thriller paradise (Translation work) it starts at ch 193 and is 40 ch ahead and still being updated. Regularly!!? So go that novel when done reading this!!!! Now! Now!!!! Why the flip are you still reading!!!!!??
hi there, kinda shameless for an author to review their own book(nervously laughs). Well, I shamelessly gave myself all stars on world background and character design. This is because while I struggle in a lot of areas in writing (fight scenes) pppsch who said that? I try to make my characters not only the MC but also the side characters seem as wholesome as possible, to have a personality that people can actually remember them even 50 chapters later and I hope I did that with this book.The cases featured in this novel some will be cultivation tropes and others will be a little unique. Also just as a heads-up the novel also features multiple POVs..It's hard to just sit in the courtroom when there's a whole world out there. Who knows what might be cooking? Anyhow, I hope you enjoy the novel as much as i enjoy writing it and potentially get Yang Qing in trouble.
I really like the book but I am afraid Is author going to stop because book is in it's intial phase and chapters count also decreased drastically....I hope author sama continue the book Waiting for more chapters
From what I read of this novel thus far I'm hooked. I'm glad to see it make an appearance on webnovel.I hope it'll get published soon and we can all enjoy it.
The story is nice, and the sci-fi flavor does much to bring originality to wuxia.The problem is Qidan, as usual their money focused politics ruins everything. Months of waiting time for new chapters and when they do pop up, it's at a snail pace AND costing money!Makes you wish the novel remained with TRANSLATION NATIONS instead...
I have to say, this novel is one of the most interesting cultivation novel I have read recently. The mystery, the desire to learn unknown is very intriguing. The most impressive thing about the novel is the detailed path of cultivation and the relms. Though the relm is cliché, but how the relm is cultivated is an eye opener. Specially, mc needs to figure out how to breakthrough higher relm himself.
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I enjoyed the beginning, but when it goes premium after 7 chapters. Kind of puts a dampening on wanting to read the whole thing. I'm an advocate for paying for chapters because I believe the authors deserve recognition.
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At the start it was quite interesting but as the novel progressed the MC became racist,stupid, illogical and perverted.I have totally stopped reading it.If it gets better I'll try again.
There is no racism if there are no other countries ... at least at the beginning, there is only Huaxia and/or Chinese civilization ... you read right Chinese civilization, not Earth civilization...