it's kinda meh.. mc is kinda like a delinquent.. messing with others n their lives n all..MC is targeted by some random stranger everywhere.. usually ends up with MC dealing with that person immediately.. and an elder pops up to take revenge.. it always turns out that the elder is from 'New Church" (most evil organisation in the world) or is closely related.. Immediately someone pops up to save himSystem has consciousness n punishes him for thinking badly about the system n all.. When asked by MC to save him system simply says it'll find someone else instead.. MC almost got a grandpa(soul in a bead here) to follow him around but the system gave him an ultimatum.. have the system or the grandpa.. he gets rid of the grandpa(not killing.. almost like releasing).. cuz system wanted monopoly over him.. n MC probably would suffer to cultivate if system left him as his foundation is really bad and it's all piled up forcefully by the system.. so almost like a slave to the system I'd say
I'm having a really hard time to tell if this is bad or good here's what I have to say I like the starting point of the MC its original for the starting point and the system isn't to overpower to start off I also like that he's introducing modern things for trade eventually here's what I don't like story reads a little more like a military log with some Flair it does not have much character development it's more of MC goes to point A dose things then goes to point B does things sometimes goes back to point A there's our only real three instances that I can think of that have some character development but for the most part it doesn't exploring characters including the MC I think it would be a very good story if it got Rewritten a little and started to explore and go in depth of the characters and make you invest in them
I want to read your story but you just locked your story in just ten chapters, come on man that is not enough to review your story for me...
Very interesting, most especially the fight scenes. The mental picture created when reading is what makes it very interesting. Keep it up and I'm hoping to read more chapters in the subsequent months to come.
I don’t know if you can see this author but I have read many novels and the impact this one has had on me is on the same level as when I first started reading cultivation novels. Your Ideas on Dao and True Cultivation are truly novel and amazing. It has expanded my world view on what it means to be a cultivator. I guess this is an example of the saying, the Dao is Infinite.I hope you continue writing this book someday when you are ready again as I would love to read more on your thoughts about Dao and Cultivation.
Finally, no more where the MC try to regain his human form because his a monster. The MC is cunning and smart, he know how to adapt to the situation his in.