I always leave writing quality at four for anyone because you should always strive to be better. It's nothing personal. Your education as a writer is never finished. Other than that it was nice to read a coherent story, that made sense and I could follow.
Only two chapters so far so review might need to be changed in the future. So far the story is really weird, the prologue chapter gave some interesting information that helped pique my interest but the actual first chapter felt like it was narrated by a teenage boy going through puberty. It was just all over the place
The author weaves an amazing stories with lots of details that’s really immersive. I love the dialogue, the struggles of Long-Wei and the strong characters. I forgot how much I love this genre! ❤️
This novel as so much potentials but it’s completely wasted. The writing may not be the best but the story’s interesting and same for the MC.But all these points are all wasted because the novel’s not finish and there a repeting chapter constantly.I don’t know why the autor stopped but it’s such a shame.
why isn't this on the fanfic section.also a good fanfic if you wanna read.
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This is a real gem here . The readers feels the emotional devloment of the mc and even in the first few chapters it really hits diffrent ..................
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raw link please, also I hope this novel be select.
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Although the novel starts out with a very good plot with very realistic characters, events and writing quality, it makes a turn for the worst after the 18+ comes into play.Im not talking about the book quickly going downhill , im talking about a ripe apple getting left in the open.The book starts with a very realistic-fantasy novel to a sort of xianxia type novel with the amount of arrogant young masters and face slapping later in the story.With all said, I do recommend you give this novel a try and see for yourself.
Another system novel where MC intelligence shows author is either 5 years old or mentally handicapped. He sells things that are worth hundreds of gold for couple pieces of silver and yet everyone thinks he's such an amazing and cunning person while the rest of the novel is spent simping on every woman that comes across and acting like a dog despite being the son of the most powerful man in the entire region...