Hi Author,I love the story it's very fascinating. I hope the grammar lapses gets fixed and no it's not just changing tenses but also point of view.e.g; when the main character is talking about himself as a 3rd persons point of view.
Dang. This novel seems pretty interesting so far. And honestly, it's really tough for me to actually get into a novel unless the plot, characters and pace of the story is good so I it's awesome in that aspect.The translating and editing of the story was good too so it really helpes immerse myself into the story. All in all, would recommend this story to anyone looking for an interesting read :D
Writing quality is spot on except for the rare miss spelling. Paragrapgs should also be cut to read easier.Update stability is practically every week so its good.Storry development is good, but gives me the feel similar to Chinese novels, except it's the american version. With less racism. Hopefully.Charachter design is good. I wish he started of older but I'm cool with how he is now. Also wish he was abit more Op. Like Natalie Portman in the movie Lucy. But he would gain power at a slower rate.The being at the bigining should also make an appearance, soon but that's just my opinion.World background is pretty much earth with just afew more baddies and mysteries, so its ok.So over all its a good read that I recommend you try. Keep it up author.
Although i have read many other reincarnation novels along the way but this really caught my eye.if you are a fan of reincarnation based novels,you will absolutely love this one. I do hope this one gets selected for next week to be released. If you are planning to read it do it.
I absolutely love the book and finished it all in one day but it hasn’g updated in 2 months ?. Thanks for such an amazing story and i hope this is picked back up again.
The story is fresh. Though it started as a presentation of a teens perspective at the start but as the story progresses, the perspectives grow deeper and deeper. The more you read, the more entrigued you become. Since it's hard to anticipate what will happen next. The story teller used technique that brings you to the mind of a character. You cannot wait when and how the lives of the characters will entertwine. Though Aiden is the main character, but the other characters are equally colorful. It's exciting when the character of the vilain will be finally revealed. Though it's too early to judge the technical ability of the author but he is very effective in presenting introspection which gives depth and color.
This nice but you should also add many more good shows like the one when ji mo stands up to a bully and so. And also this is extremely realistic in the world today . No cap
Great novel, it make me sad that it won't be chosen till god know when :-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):-):,-):,-):,-):,-):,-):,-)
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