the story is great I just feel like the MC is an idiot he keeps falling for the same thing like things covering his face but doesn't call the slime or takes a beating when he doesn't have to by withholding his transformation..... But other wise good job Author
THis is a good story. I am too lazy to write.THis is a good story. I am too lazy to write.THis is a good story. I am too lazy to write.THis is a good story. I am too lazy to write.THis is a good story. I am too lazy to write.
I loved the first volume 10/10 for me but i hate second volume same amount.It is too long and boring to be fair i did skim trough last 100 chapters because i couldnt bear with it. I hopr next volume will be better.
Very well done. The story flows like smooth butter! I like where it is going (as of chap 37), and really hope you don’t drop it. If you can increase releases a bit it would be even more perfect :)
A masterpiece.. And for it to be dropped abd picking up trash generic novels.. Webnovel you're ****!
Now I feel whole trial read system is ****! No point ..you don't see ratings you don't see views and readers opinions and just choose based on editors choice or your so called coins used of which we don't even get to see the data.. For fucks sake those novels it picked up won't even last long! Fcking generic trash novels..fck you!
One Of the best novel that i read, My preferences of novel is one with an op mc, so this fit's perfect with my preferences,
But the storyline kinda repeat itself, you can improve on that :D
Interesting Story Concept and detailed explanations....Loved the description of the Big Bang Evolution along with Adam and Eve with a twist. The main character is strong, conflicted and can't wait to find out what happens next.
Looking forward to the next happenings of this story i find it quiet nice and interesting so i will try to read more of this ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
I like the over all detail and the Emerstion that comes as a result of knowing the history beHind the tactics and the troops. !!
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