"Then are we being exterminated by the Creator?" Zither asked.
Shameless Author,
The 'sleeping beauty' has finally opened her eyes, but something was amiss.
Based on chapters 1-244,I would start off with the story general plotline being similar to WMW or Warlock of the Magus world if you have read that. Many reviews would comment on that and some agree that it is very similar. I just want to highlight that the reviewers have said that this came first so from that it is assume that WMW have potentially copied the aspects from this novel rather than this novel copying WMW. However, because this novel have less translated chapters than WMW and WMW being in a more prominent position in reputation, people assume that this novel is just a copycat. I just want to mention this point because alot of the new viewers need to know that the novel is not a copycat and WMW is not a copycat either because nothing in the world is truly original. Many work done by people have aspects from other activities. This novel compared to the WMW is just like Harry potter and Lord of the rings, both have magic and villans that is super overpowered. I know the comparison is not one to one while WMW with this novel is super similar, but the MC do things quite differently, for me WMW MC is more cold and machine like while the MC here is more human like but less clever. *Minor spoiler, WMW MC is colder for me because he don't really appreciates his family while this MC does so that speaks alot of words.* But sometimes I question the decision made by this MC more as he makes more mistakes which could be good as it shows his human side. For me, this novel and WMW is similar to Power Rangers from my childhood,Power ranger always follows the same principle, have the rangers and the villains fighting one another and the rangers winning fight at the end of the day but people still watch that because the side story and how the rangers achieve their powers is what attracts viewers so the path taken by MC is similar but what they did and how they achieve it is different. Overall the storyline is turning out great as each motive is back-up and their is good progress, world background have potential for having ancient times and modern age incorporated as well as having multiple continents to explore, Character is on par with WMW, maybe better on the personality side but lacking in history of the character (have to wait), the updating stability and translation quality is 3 stars for me as it is not overly fast like other novel at 20 but it is still good enough already and there is a few grammar mistakes(such as not knowing who the MC is addressing his message to and etc) that affect the story a little bit but generally understandable and the experience is not affected. This novel is rated above average in my library and it is really good to read it thinking that it is like another path that the MC with computer chip in his soul can take. Although the future development is unknown for me as I have not read the raw but I guess that it will be as great as WMW is. Good work Translator, a baby step now, a general in the future! Ps. This is my first review ever so I may not write a very good and accurate review but I hope it helps to attract you to read this novel without too much spoiler. English is my second language so sorry for any inconvenience! :)
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After tidying the scattered drawings, she noticed there was something different about the storage room.
Review at CH162.. The beast taming aspect of the story is done really well as Karl tries to navigate the path to making his tames better. The writing and world development overall dont leave much to be desired. The pacing kind of feels like we're following a slice of life with some combat here and there. My main complaint so far would have to be the character development.A lot of the characters, to include MC, seem rather flat and dont have much of a personality. Other than being stronger, it doesnt seem like the MC has any sort of goal nor do we really get a peek at his mentality. The tamed monsters are arguably more entertaining and individualized than any of the human characters we meet so far.I really enjoy the novel and wait for my chapters daily, just hope we can get more full bodied characters
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Interesting build up stories from the Beginning until the latest chapter also the alternate Alex also amazed me in many ways hopefully to see more of this
It's a great book, fighting author, it's a book to imagine yourself being in a war, highly recommendable for everyone to read and learn that when it comes to achieving a common goal, that what I learned in the first two chapters. Am gonna read more
Okay so let me just say this upfront: the fake STD rumor plotline is absolutely vile and I love it. Not love the suffering, but love how the author weaponizes it. Wen Zhili gets framed with photoshopped medical records, anonymous classmates calling her a slut, and then—plot twist—her ex Huo Cheng is the one throwing printed papers in her face like some medieval town crier. The irony is delicious because we know she's innocent, and the reader is screaming into the void while she just walks out calm as a cucumber. But here's what really made me sit up: the pimp scene. Wen Yuxuan literally orchestrates this. She signals the guy, sits in Huo Cheng's car like it's a goddamn theater production, and watches from the passenger seat. That's not just mean—that's calculated. And then Huo Shengbai shows up, but not before Wen Zhili herself flips this grown man over her shoulder and beats him with her high heel. The plot doesn't just rescue her; it lets her rescue herself first, and Huo Shengbai gets to witness it. That's a gorgeous narrative choice. The subplot with the black card and the pipa lessons is also doing heavy lifting. On the surface it's just 'rich guy gives money,' but Huo Shengbai's real motivation is sneaky—he wants her at his house every weekend. He's building a reason to be close to her while pretending it's a business arrangement. The plot is layering his obsession like an onion, and I'm here for it.