Addicted already! No cap??
I like the story and all but translation went downhill starting in ch 171.I like the story and all but translation went downhill starting in ch 171.
Just 2 question. Did he change in the later chapters or is he still the same lazy ass, unfilial, arrogant, stupid piece of shet. If he did change, at what chapter do we start seeing progress? Cause if he didn't, I'm going to drop the novel period.
A story made of cliched plot points. The MC being a reborn world jumper, the parents poor, and the father a blindly trusting fool to name a few. I'm amazed that the author can shove so many crap ways to show the dad being an idiot in one chapter. I'm stopping my reading at chapter 39 since I just can't take the crap contained by it anymore. I know the market is flooded and you have to be a bit nationalist with your leanings but this novel seems to exhibit how the average citizen's interaction with the government is always like dealing with a corrupt official. And the antagonist is a 5-6 year old girl referred to as "Lolita". No doubt she'll start loving the MC at some point soon. It's just bad. Author should stop writting this and lay out the plot trajectory for the first Arc and restart it from the beginning with the same world and characters. The place and some people have a good setup but are handled badly so the story is just not worth the time to read or translate.
I want to give the lowest rating because i am upset why did he quiT writing it was sooo Good i wish we could get more tbh but for now im greatly disappointed on the author.!
with experience of reading books for like 50 years nowi am so sorry to say that in my opinion the pick up novel this weekthe 25 september. is very poor, this novel's don't have any tastewhat so ever.and i am sorry to say that in my opinion also the new selection in the trailthis week also not so good in my eyes.remember i read book even before the internet.and there is still a few novels here that is very good 2
Raw please...................................... please...................................... please...................................... please......................................
Sigh... once again my review was removed. This novel is so bad, the author gave up on it. Yes, this novel is unfinished, dropped. Stop censorship, stop manipulation, stop dictatorship!
KiBiBiK's review series:One sentence review: A pretty interesting cheat power that gets ruined through boring repetition of the plot as well as uninteresting and unrelatable characters (And also boring and fake dialogues).Detailed review: An interesting cheat power that has tremendous potential in terms of treasure hunting. I had great hopes for the future but the story clearly showed its level of less than mediocrity from the beginning itself. I could think of tens of scenes and uses of this power straight out of my mind in a couple of seconds but the author decided to stick with 'storage' gambling. Just that. Repeat that. Repeat that. Repeat that.Did n't you get annoyed? Exactly that's my problem here. 60+ chapters done and the author is cycling the same thing again and again. And let me tell you, this thing is new and but not the coolest. (I believe 130+ is still the same thing)Is there a hook that makes you read the novel? NOIs there an interesting character or MC that makes you continue reading? NO. (Some might like the characters- but I find them dull)Another big problem is the unnecessary racial discrimination and slurs used. Just freaking unneeded. "Yellow" this. "Yellow" that. Seriously. You could do better.Logic: Somewhat works somewhere. But I find big loopholes everywhere in terms of modern legal system as well as personality. A foreign student who got enrolled in a 'Fake' university will be in the process of DEPORTATION. But the MC can do whatever he wants. Maybe, the author will touch that up later? who knows?It is illegal to work or earn money for someone with a Student Visa. This guy is making money and then publicizing it.Let's forget this assuming he is a US citizen or permanent resident. But he is clearly not American. A stranger who he just met is willing to invest money trusting him without questions? And even gives 60-40 share? Seriously? What year is this?Characters are too loud and dull. "Hey Buddy" hundred times. The usage of God in this novel is HORRIBLE and annoying. You are Cheating for God's sake and still say God loves me. Too lazy to write anything else..YawnI read this much leaving my brain locked up. Good luck.You might like it.ProsA unique modern settingAn interesting cheat powerConsAll the sentences above
It's kinda westernised verse of Darwin's game... though i see some altercations..craving for some major plot development and have high hopes ??
that the synopsis does not deceive you, the novel starts great, and develops quite well, the beginning was at least curious, but original xd, and the lemon is quite good
The story had a lot of potential, unfortunately the translation sucks.