Very good, congratulations, I'm on 7, just one thing I didn't understand, I don't know if it will explain, but if the system had control, why didn't it control Sra Claus when he was talking to Santa Claus?
I'm going to take 10th review~Thank you for your support for my new book. This is my first time entering a writing competition and I have to say I'm a little nervous. This time, I took genre system harem genre (as always) and modern era. Slightly similar to my previous novel.This is also the first time I've written a tentacled MC *Cough* (Don't judge me). So anything can happen in this story. I hope you enjoy this book~
Translator quality seems quite weak, reoccuring problem where boss-grade and leader-grade are both translated into leader grade leading to sentences such as"...as a leader-class gene, the increase was several times greater than that of a leader-class gene"Also an repeating issue where the drop color for elite-class drops and boss-class drops are both described as a green in spite of being supposed to have different giving cases such as the main character receiving 2 white drops, 1 green drop and 1 green drop and sentences talking how a green drop is much rarer than a green drop.Aside from this like a few others have already commented there are reoccuring problems with he/she him/her.The translation desperately needs an editor, proofreader or a more qualified translator to not be jarring. I'm frankly not convinced this isn't just moderately edited MTL.Presuming there was a swap in translator at I'd guess 40 chapters because whoever did the author's note translation in ch1 actually translated the grade terms properly for everything and whoever took over the translation doesn't seem to be using the same glossary since they use different translations for the different levels making it extremely hard to follow along due to inconsistency in the translation.
An updated overview of the story:Re: LBA is based in a futuristic-modern world where humans can surpass their biological limits. There is advanced technological innovation, the birth of superhumans, and many more.What to expect: 1. The story is LitRPG, so a decent portion of the story will revolve around that factor.2. High amounts of action, life-like dialogue and reactions, and intimate relationships, whether romantic or platonic.3. The story will focus on the MC's growth above all but also incorporate his allies. Once they are introduced, they will experience growth alongside Kieran.4. A Weak-to-Strong novel. But the growth more so relates to the MC's power in relation to his enemies. The notion of him being weak from the beginning is wrong. On the contrary, others view him as overpowered.5. Earth and Xenith (the game's world) will expand in several directions.6. Evolution, Kingdom-Building, Rise to Fame, and Production (Alchemy, Forging, etc.) all become a focus throughout the story when the plot calls for it.I have omitted a few other key factors, but those are for you all to learn about after you've begun your reading journey. Enjoy~
For the love of god I’ll take this. Y’all mught complain about copy & paste cultivation novels but I quite enjoy them SO IF YOU COULD PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF F#^^*]* GOD NOT COMPLETELY DESTROY THIS FOR ME. YOU KNOW HOW HARD IT IS TO GET A REGULAR CULTIVATION NOVEL ON HERE NOW????
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I’m addicted to this novel Didn’t expect it to be this goodI thought it was going to be the typical shallow bl romance but this story is pretty nuanced. No 2D characters here, they all have feelings and motives behind the way they act. I also appreciate how the author strayed from the cliches making it apparent that the MC’s childhood had more complications he couldn’t see due to his age in is first life. Looking forward to what the author has prepared next. I hope with all my heart that the author follows through with this novel because it’s amazing and super well written.
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This book is a hidden gem...Story started slow but background is amazing without any loophole..I find chapter 5 to chapter 8 ..somewhat boring but next 2 chapter is op...thanks for the chapters
Seems to be a blend of other stories of the genre. Overall good stuff, hopefully some longer chapters will be coming in the future. Xp and cultivating for greater power. Wonder what class he will pick next?
Finally A novel with Non-human Mc.....He doesn't care about humans......So If you want to Read non-human mc who is nice and dosnt kill humans..Than this not for you....‐-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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