Id like to start off by saying that the concept behind the novel has alot of potential, four races create a vr mmorpg where participation is somewhat mandatory after a certain age and most conflicts are settled in game rather than real life. However none of the important parts of the novel are explained such as why his parents dont help him out when hes just starting out or play with him at all and why his school is so loose with rules/regulations regarding the game when they dont teach anything else, how he manages to find a legacy item somewhere that hundreds if not thousands of people visit regularly for years, the small amount of classes even though the game has been running for hundreds of years, the company/ people behind the game i dont think was mentioned and they have not become a huge super power even though they built something so important, why three women who are 7-9 years older than him fall in love ludicrously fast, why he gains a huge amount of money but hides it for fear of the government coming after him instead of using it for his family, why a 16 year old kid doesnt act like one when hes had a relatively normal upbringing and doesnt have any actual issues and one the author claims to be shy and introverted doesnt behave that way half the time, why the MC has actually no friends not even close acquaintances even though he has lived for 16 years, why people treat NPC’s like dirt even though being courteous at least leads to more opportunities and quests even after hundreds of years of the game being around, how the MC seems stronger than average characters even though he hasnt put any points into stats (before he gets his wolf partner), why the “CLASS” quest that he gets requires him to run all over the game world before getting ANY ability or even the class name, the authors fetish with black cloaks and the way he introduces them, why does the MC need to keep everything a secret when the major powers offered him benefits in exchange and the did so somewhat respectfully instead of chasing him down and killing him to level one, why he bought a mask if he doesnt take off the cloak around people except his harem and NPC’s.I have a lot more things i could add but i already passed 2k characters so ill end it there, but please get an editor and translator, everytime i read a novel like this i cant help but feel it would be at least 2x as good in the native language of the author and a “rough” translation to english brings the story down.
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I really like this novel and there is almost no flaw in it that I can point out except for one which is Ling Chen's age and maturity.I get Ling Chen has been living a harsh life ousted by the world as some sort of demon / fiend god which would probably mature a kid past their age. But Ling Chen is 10 years old yet he acts like someone maybe in their 20s or 30s to the point of it becoming ridiculous now.Now Ling Chen also has a kid that was birthed from the Black Lightning fruit (correct me if i'm wrong) and now he, a 10 year old, is now taking care of a new born. Ling Chen had stated himself on how difficult it would be to raise the baby as he was practically a baby himself, but he really needs to act his age more. He's 10 for god sake. I just wish the author made Ling Chen 20 before Ling Lei was born or something...In conclusion, Ling Chen acts way older than he actually is. Which I find annoying. My rating is still a 4.5 but point really bugs me...
Don’t know why there are so many 5 stars for this jove. The translation is inconsistent and numbers just get swapped around, which leads to a lot of confusion and guess work. MC makes dumb choices for the sake of looking bad ass, contracts seem useless as there’s no power within them to make he other person follow it. Way to fast paced, and everybody just fawning over MC’s awesomeness.It’s not bad, but definitely not 5 stars worthy.
Nonsense. Nonsense. Nonsense. Nonsense. Nonsense. Nonsense. Nonsense. Nonsense. Nonsense. Nonsense. Nonsense. Nonsense. Damn 140 characters minimum.
Mc is a slave to the system. Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system.Mc is a slave to the system. I have read 0 chapters and will never even try this. Mc is a slave to the system.
It seems really intersting but i cant find the raw can someone write the raw the the comments???????????????????????
Hey guys, Author here! New story in the works and I really hope you all enjoy it??Not a fan of may words so I'm just going to lay out what you should be expecting from this!1.) Steady world build that is slowly revealed throughout the book. Definitely no info dumps in any way whatsoever!2.) A perverted MC who also has a stable head on his shoulders. He loves the femme fatale but he doesn't let them control his every decision in life!3.) So much character build that'll never stop increasing. The events of this story is just as funny as it is trauma inducing and the characters will reflect that.Hope you all stick around till the end! Thanks!FYI. I'm giving myself five stars just for kicks. If I deserve it then please leave a review!
Author will mc’s mother be in his harem?
The chapters are long. The grammar is good, with little to no mistake, but there is something always missing in each chapter. Basically, even though there is a lot things of happening on the chapter, I always feel it's quite boring. IDK if it's just me(?) or maybe I am just burnt out.
Amazing start! really love the imagination of the writers. lovely piece.
Now that is a very strong female lead, please update more soon