This Book has piqued my Curiosity while scrolling and decided to give it a try.After reading all currently available chapters I found out...
I really like this, right up my alley and seems to have some action coming in later chapters. Its upsetting there's so little chapters though, going to have to wait.
This novel is poison, I wouldn't recommend people to read this. The grammar is extremely bad, half of the stuff happening in the novel doesn't even make sense. The mc is a retard who's got no IQ. Events randomly take place out of nowhere accompanied by haphazard time-skips. Poison testing this novel equates to "Death".
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what a stupid mc after getting the system the stronger he gets the stupider he becomes . . .. . .. .. ... ... ... .... ..
Here are my thoughts about this novel based on what I read,World Background: So far the world background is mostly fine, I mean the author actually gives some description about it. But, I believe the author will expand more about the world itself especially the place where the mc living.Character: So far I do appreciate that author give the main character Alexender and Amelia a significant appearance which is quite interesting. The character also have distinct personalities especially on the two main cast. But, I do believe the author will give more context about the character's background and the relationship to make this romance novel more exciting to read.As for the writing, in my opinion, it's quite smooth to follow, but there are some flaws that the author can fix easily and I am sorry for saying this. Based on what I read, some paragraphs only contained one long sentence. Therefore, I prefer the author to separate it into 2-3 sentences, so it can make the reader more efficient to read. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel, and thank you very much. Keep up the good work!!
Three hours: a gamble of time is definitely the right title for this book. only in this book, i smell poetry, sci-fi. The world background is excellent and the diction to which every event is portray is top notch. Nice work author.
It’s an okay idea. It’s not original since there’s been novels with the same premise as martial spirits or battle souls, but it seems the author decided to use western names despite being in eastern culture. It really isn’t a problem for the normal reader except some cultivation fans. The problem is the grammatical errors. There‘d also some spelling mistakes here and there.Suggest author install grammarly on his device. It would improve the novel. Anyway that all for now, might change my review in the future…
a great novel............. it has a lot of potential...................................................................................................
Okay, so where do we start? The characters? The scene-setting? The hooks? I would say this all together. EVERYTHING IS ON THE POINT. The element needed in a thriller is not just a plot. Good writing is what makes a good thriller a good thriller. Author-sama. YOU ROCK. Will keep on reading your book in future.