A powerful start with great image created. The plot grows so well throughout the chapters while the picture becomes clearer through those words written. Overall a great read
So far so good.
so...the start in undertale was good, but then it became a half assed 1 paragraph long chapter per world! -_-i simply can't recomend this read
unfortunately, i feel like i have wasted my time reading this, and most of this review will probably be what i dislike about this great novel.a great beginning, that will probably hook in most who like this genre, showing interesting characters as the story goes on. as Will (MC) becomes older, more of the world is revealed, but not explored beyond "this is this, and that is that." although it feels slow-paced, the author is constantly releasing chapters. however, sometimes the writing feels muddy and repetitive, but i think those moments became rarer as i continued reading. i think many people will probably like this story with the exception of a few things like Will's shepherd class, Celine in general, and maybe Will's character. all the way until the tldr at the end are spoilers, so skip if you don't want those.i don't like Celine, mainly because her character is defined as "yandere crazy, but is actually a good person at heart." in the first few chapters she is shown, her only redeeming action was helping Lont. right before she enslaves Will as the price because he was the one to interrupt her experiment. she goes to torture him for the sake of his training and building resistance to dark magic. his reaction is: "She is a good person." Will's only mention of resentment is a single sentence and is only "a little bit." basically, she never looks or seems like a good person, because she never does anything to warrant that besides random thoughts where she sympathizes with Will. an unlikeable character for me.it might just be my bad memory, but i don't think Will has any meaningful character development. throughout the 114 chapters, he is always the happy boy who is kind to others, but comedically narcissistic. besides learning his motivations for the future and maturing in the most obvious ways, he is painfully generic. the only unique thing i can say about him is his narcissistic joke. hopefully his changes are more prominent after he recovers from his apathetic mood around chapter 114 or his training in general.lastly, the entire novel up to now feels like a very, very long setup. i have already said this is slow-paced, because it seems like the author is setting up and showing all of these characters who will be relevant to future plot points. some are even the cause of future plot points (Celine, Ella, Will's mother), but i think this is what ruins it for me. i do not know when this setup will ever pay off, and i'm not enjoying the novel as much as i was before. to me, it's dragging on and i don't want to invest more time into it.tldr; feels like the novel drags on, and many small events that i don't like pile up and ruin my enjoyment of it. it's still a great story, so for those reading this, please do give it a try. it might just be for you.
The book is great, first chapter got me wanting more although Simon made me sad at first ? then boom! he's in this dangerous world and has changed.
Author your grammar is on point, world building is okay .
The book has a future. keep it up.
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Author asked me to review so I shall break my “no review” virginity to show my support. This novel somehow feels very unique compared to everything else. For one, the world doesn’t revolve around the mc. Keep the chapters coming!
I know i keep putting MID on all your chapters but its out of love XD anyways pretty good actually so good job sir apparently you have to fill thiswelpcool
Hey ?,I am not reall good in reviewing but let’s go.This book as of chapter eight is really good to read and has a bit of myster as for why the mc had that dream and, if the system is his own cheat or comes with mysterious blood which he got.I hope you won’t drop this. Furthermore, for those who don’t know his other book is really good with a nice harem plot and system
IF and maybe a novel that drags you to the start of the page, feeling to know more and more. Its writing style is awesome and the plot is too attractive. Good work author keep it up.
Breathtaking story. Every tree that would be used to publish this in physical form would die knowing its existence was enhanced to the highest level.
Just a standard wuxia story but the mc reincarnated 1000 years before his death so no clue when he’s gonna find his enemy’s. In just the second chapter he already is rescuing a beautiful girl saving her brother and dodging bullets