An amazing novel with top quality content and consistent chapters, I think the novel has some unique and intriguing ideas. Overall I think the novel is Great and I hope the author continues with this Book.
Sometimes, you read a book and it fills you with this weird evangelical zeal, and you become convinced that the shattered world will never be put back together unless and until all living humans read the book.
I really like how the story is told for now, and the grammar is good too. Less than ten characters have appeared so far, but I feel that this is going to be the kind of story without many 2D characters, but with more 3D characters and not so cartoonish. I could feel it through the dialogues and the way the characters express themselves in some situations.Of course, I can't stop talking about the protagonist, who for me is one of the highlights of the story so far. He is ironic, serious, intelligent, mischievous and, above all, a great character.Thanks to all this, this story deserves 5 stars (and my first review).
ok so, there are two problems in this story that most people may agree with.first one is updating speed... and second are characters or to be specific, depending on you, MC and others may fit your taste or not, but i must mention that later on in the story characters change their behaviour to some degree so you may want to stay and see if the change is up to your taste
I ve read to chapter 12 and skipped to some further chapters and honestly I'm quite frustrated. What's the point of having a 'first life' and reincarnating in this novel. It feels like it's put there for the sake of having the word 'reincarnation' in the tags, we hardly get to see the Mc's feelings or ambitions from his previous life, what are his regrets? What's moral and immoral for him? There's a reason why most of these novels spend a great deal at building the mc's backstory. I'm pretty the author would explore the mc's personality further in future chapters using flashbacks or whatever, but at that point people would stop caring about his previous life
The person translating this novel basically just copy and pasted from the website, you can notice it in chapter 8 where it specifically shows where it comes from and numerous other things. The quality of the translation isn’t great, you can understand what’s going on but it make take a few times reading the same sentence. I’ve just looked up the story on google and started reading it there myself. Much better translation quality than the author posted and it’s a complete novel already released.
This is a great story and I would think I have a great judge of story's. This story has a great storyline and it really pulls you in. Out of everything I think the story development is a little quick and kind of unnatural based in the circumstances that the characters have been through but other then that I think that this story has the ability to be one of the top story's on this app. Continue doing great author and you will have my support all the way to the end.
Great story. Very very interesting. Love the ML, he is kind and very smart for his age. keep it up author, looking forward to more chapters.
Deserves more attention... The characters are funny and genuine and the smut atm is good but it focuses more on plot and character development which in my opinion is the better choice... I recommend you to give it a try
Since nobody is rating this, I guess the author guy shall start by being awesome. Welp, I like this story, if you don't, well that's your opinion although it's wrong.Yes you heard that right, if you think it's bad YOUR OPINION IS WRONG. Bye.
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I did not like the character very much, he is very insensitive and your writing is bad, not your spelling, if not in how you describe things and the passage of time in fact you do not even write it, you just pretend that the protagonist was there for a long time. I would have liked a timeskip or something.