I'll say right away I rarely comment, but I can't help but comment on this reading. An interesting work, as well as the world together with the plot.I like it, I hope for a sequel soon.
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Wait, I forgot to do the review for reading all the chapters hahaha, let me tell you, it hooks me up since the first chapter! Sometimes I even forgot to leave a chapter or paragraph comments, I can even read it again and leave it, just in case... I'll continue reading, I like the steady space that you give to your writing, and the development is great! Keep going my dear Author! I'll cheer you up!
it's very refreshing, usually when we have a nonhuman MC they love humans and try to become one again and dislike killing them but this one wants to kill everything on the planet.
Need the raws!!! unless this is also from a original story without raw and just made up the the webnovel.Great story so far............................
Very clear writing style and world building. It's one of if not the best novel I have read for now. The plot and character are absolutely perfect. It's clearly a gem among the novel of this platform.
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This is good story and has good pace ....I read it's original and can only say that the is worth the read .( the book is complete?) with the only downside being the rushed ending with confused explaination thus feel disheartened in the end but nonetheless a good book.
Hi author DhaRylLoner I just want to say that your story Once Upon A Mistake is not just a novel. It will nice if webnovel will make a film adaptation on this story. It is so awesome story! I would like to read it again and again. I am still waiting for the book 2 by the way. Hehe that's all and thank you for the very awesome story!
I got to chapter 34 and can say that the writing has improved, and seems like a good story so far. I am looking forward to how this book will go.Overall I feel that the world building and character development is done just right for the beginning of the book thus far.As for story development I personally like the path taken where there is a goal seen already for the plot, with an easy path to continuing further.
This is to inform potential readers what to expect: (And Q&A for readers)
1. OP MC that has to grow. He isn't the strongest from chapter 1. He continues to grow and with each awakening, he gets relatively more OP.
2. Plot and puzzles. There will be some obvious hints along the way and a few obscure ones. If you can piece them together, then you can anticipate parts of upcoming plot.
Some event in the beginning could come back in the end. Actions have consequences.
3. Characters: Varian is a strong person. Despite that, he'll have his moments of weakness. Not just in a physical sense but as in emotional.
Other characters have their own backstory and they have the reasons to act the way they do. Even the most hated character has a backstory that shaped them.
4. World: It's revealed slowly. There will be foreshadowings.
Use this review for Q&A. I'll try to answer as many as I can.