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Breathtaking!! Nothing short of Breathtaking! This unique story is an awesome work of art. It envelopes the harsh reality of a war while underlying the fleeting beauty of living with such burdensome responsibility. The characters, the writing style, the description, the world-building and even the instances playing out— everything is so top notch! From grinning widely to sobbing subty. This book takes you on a roller coaster ride of emotions. It makes me want to re-read the book again and again. Overall, I highly recommend it to everyone! Ps. Don't forget to grab a whole bunch of tissues!!
nice they put back a book from a year ago, with all 60 chapters unlocked for free! ....
SPEEEEEEEED....Shameless, Borderline Psycho, Cunning, Ruthless MC.Awesome Comedy.Younger Sisters- Mind you, its Sister's'.Beat Taming.Void Abilities- Space and Time (Maybe not sure.)Exciting World Background- Universe Scale.What more do you want?Come, let's enjoy.
its trash and boring , i can not go past 40 chapter. what a waste of time.it started good but it went down. he is just collecting girls no world building nothing
hlo author can u tell me why r u writing filler chapters at least 40% chapters recentely r fillersand these chapters r also very short at least increase some words count
I haven’ read that far but the kid is crippled it doesn’ t fix when he goes into vr he gets trampled on the story is not going good
do not make mc a cuck it will be very stupid because he has perverted system he should cuck others
This is hidden gem space manipulation and cultivation sutra are best i have seen For me its the best novel there i have read every eastern fantasy but this one with every chApter hits a spot for me its simply brilaint .first story arc completes in 1100 chapter but this is worth it .there is character development . No young master no harem no irritations simply .mc does what he wants to do in latest chapter is exploring the things by detail which is looking amazing and cultivation system of both qi and body tempering is also well explained .for body tempering its going a best way there is out in this universe of writing
This was painful to read, arrond chapter 100 it become machine translation and it get worse every chapter with no editing whatsoever. I manage to last until chapter 188. Maybe the story is interesting, but I will never know.
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This book is a hidden gem! Although it's not suitable for ******* readers that don't really.like complicated novels that much but for me, I really do like it. If you want to have many readers then try to simplify your point. The characters might lack some development since its slow but I can handle it. I gave it a 5 star since I really do like genres like this. If I were a normal reader then maybe I'll leave a 4 to 3-star rating! Anyways continue writing and improving. Your grammars, tenses, and vocabulary that needed proofread for your book to be more appealing!
