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I'll try my best to keep updating the chapters ??
Love the overall story and it's pace so far. Would love to see a more mature character design for the MC.Also there are repetition of paragraphs in some chapters hope to fix them for future readers.Best of Luck for the novel and I will love to see how to goes.✌️
I like how the FL is portrayed and how she is not always crying about things being unfair. Instead, she is doing something about it on her own
Definition of 5 star novel, this author has uploaded another just as great novel. I recommend reading this and his other novel. On a side note, here’s this;
well it's a great novel, it's intriguing and exciting. it reminds me of the American series Lucifer,this novel also has a great sense of humour
It’s an intriguing story with well written characters. I highly recommend it.
The writing draws you in. It is a rare combination of complexity, riveting action, mystery and readability.
Started well and based upon the first 100-200 chapters, review would have been far superior. However, release of new chapters dropped substantially and story writing has become mundane; including very poor proofing and character development. Not sure what happened or when/where. But if you find your original spark I’ll definitely be back. ‘Til that time…’ciao. ?
I had read since the released of 200+ chapters, this novel never fail to let me down. Probably one of the most well-written novel out there, the mc and his gang, the bromances and the fighting, everything just amazed me
"H I T L E R."
Never!
My name isn't Carl, you fool. They named us as they want, what do they think we are?
