Conquistadore_1
This novel is so heartwarming, real and a nice change of pace of realism. It's story about a woman and her (most likely to become love-interest) friend and how their life and thoughts suddenly changes with becoming a mother and (proxy) father, and the joy that the changes bring. It's not a rushed romance, on the contrary the characters have their doubts about love and whether to take chances or not.
Aside from the updates, the worth of this promising novel is +5/5.
The book is amazing!!! I fell in love with each character, their attitudes and their kawaiiness(pretty sure that's not a word, but meh). The 18+ scenes were especially great. As a yaoi lover, I give the story a full five. Only regret is, author-sama hasn't updated it!! Please update soon author-sama! I love it!! ♥ ♥ ♥
I didn't catch on all the chapters but I already wanted to write a review.
First of all, we have a very complex word built in the novel, starting from the divine instead of rock bottom but with a nice twist to the plot.
There are actually three protagonists but the author does fine work switching from one to the other.
I especially enjoy all the world descriptions.
It's a cultivation novel that I believe, even if one did not read other cultivation stories they would still be able to understand what's happening.
Best plot,good relationship, Overall Perfect !!Author please continue .. ... ...
The writing is so elegant. I can’t wait to read on and find out what’s next! This is real fantasy writing that is not typical and so well thought out. Creative! Mesmerising! Beautiful!
I like it. But needs more chapters. Come on bro you need to update more. Update faster. Can't find anything else to read. This is the best NTR.
PETS ARE FUCKING AWESOME. AS LONG AS THEY ARE NOT AS SHAMELESS AS THE CATS FROM AM I A GOD? JOKE, I LOVE THEM, BUT I LOVE CUTE LETS MORE. HIYAHHH!
The story is absurd. I am currently at chapter 110 and all I can say is this story is a waste of brain cells. Not going to suggest this story to anyone.
It starts with a scenario similar to Everyone else is a returnee. But that's it. The story just goes off tangent and stops making any sense.
To give you an idea I will briefly explain what the **** has me ranting about. MC is a loner invisible guy. Time stops and he is left alone. He spends 300 years acting as an idiot. Instead of training his skill or enjoying himself, all you find him is crying about his past and how he seems to forget everything.
Fine. We can understand that MC is depressed and so on. But 300 years? And let's not forget all the time skips. Author just out of nowhere drops a time skip. 10 yeast passed, they practiced for 20 years...it's annoying.
And then you have the author mucking about. She's trying for comedic effects, but he is trying so hard that all that comes out is depression. God Realm where the arc stops making any sense. It's so wrong....I don't even know what to say. You have mind locks, NPCs and other stuff which just DO NOT merge well into the story.
And when people do come alive the story just goes bat **** insane. Do you remember how hard was it to find magic stones? Well, the story starts and you have 'The player who first entered the game.'
Do you get it? Player who entered the game. You don't have people awakening and then hyperventilating because every thing is wrong. Nope. It's a game .
The first player than purchases magic stones, few million magic stones mind you. WTF? Are you writing a VR game novel or are you talking about real world. You don't have anyone rioting, crying, screaming. No cults preaching Apocalypse. No military efforts to bring every thing in control. No common man trying to kill himself because he just list everything.
Nope. It's just another day. Everything is normal. People immediate adapted to this whole fucking game world. You already have guild and villages. Hunters using mechas and what not. Like seriously?
If all you wanted was a game world then why didn't the **** you just created a VR novel. No sense of realism.
And if that wasn't enough. The same MC who was crying for his crush and his parents, didn't even think about visiting them. It's not like I wish he would. But what's with all this inconsistent character development.
After chapter 100, when people awaken, the MC starts acting like an NPC. Which honestly makes no sense. If it was like they legendary Mechanic where he acted like NPC to earn benefits, I could under. But this ...rubbish.
All I cay say is : Waste of time. It's just around 250 chapters long but I was already feeling drowsy 100 chapters in. The stupid change was just the final hammer.
Not going to suggest this story. Ever.
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Great novel since the character development is smooth and realistic. The plot is reasonably well written. Really underrated and needs more exposure [img=recommend]
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