Actually, I must agree with foxfire92 for recomending this story... And dare I say this story is one of my fav that I just can't wait for another update and more chp to show...This kind of Side Chara Mary-sueish-yet-not story is kinda got me. And that ZYY is almost like myself in my class except for some part...
he publicado de opiniones en el blog y no me he dado like that ni he podido hablar de lo de mi hermano no me he dado like that ni me ha dicho nada
The premises of the story doesn't look too promising. 25 chapters in, yet everything has been thoroughly repeated again and again, nothing's new. And seriously, Big Fox believed his bullsh-it about Li having a family secret or whtvr as a reason to why he could find treasures easily? And all the characters aside from the MC and his allies are drawn as dumb by the author. The story's fine, but boring as f-ck.Will probably drop or something.-----And why the hell is my reading status at ch. 9
Ngl initially I thought the mc (Samael) isn't deserving of the title villain. However that changed when and how he killed Rose. He does whatever he wanna without a care in the world, because guess what he may arguably be the strongest man besides Willburns in the world, so he doesn't need to bow down to anyone. I'm starting to like this mc y'know. A little narcissist, a little arrogant but someone who acts with brain. Keep on writing author.
I love his personality how it talk about world ams backgrounds
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Really love this ❤️The storyline... The character... The setting and the approach of our MC ... Never looked like an MC but can't complain as he never was MC material..... initially this was like the most interesting for me but slowly went down but picks up again in the middle.....A very good read
Solely for calling football soccer. At least Translate the sentence properly koreans say football what is soccer? Sucker?.Idiotic translator would have been fun to read but ruined it by calling the game soccer.
Such a good with strong storyline.. Synopsis is really attractive and it made me go for it .. About Ryan I planned to add him in my crush list... Author did a great job...
Overview TL;DR : A mediocre story with bad characterizationYou know how you're reading a story and you like the elements in it like intrigue, super powers, progression, unique world, etc.... But there's something that's just off... about the story?You, like I were probably missing proper character design and development. And none suffer more than the Main Character himself Quinn. After reading 276 chapters, all I can say about his personality is has a "strong spirit" and that's only because the author specifically said so. What's even more interesting is while being a orphan and bullied for probably his entire life, he has no social defects.Any other author who written a orphan character would build them up to have specific attributes like: incredibly isolated, irritable, vengeful, resourceful, or cunning due to circumstances. MC himself has circumstances that could characterize him (elaborating would enter spoiler territory for the first chapters) but the author doesn't uses it to define him.Even other characters have more defined characterization than him. One of them acts in a flippant manner, another has a passion for a certain subject. Man, even a character I hated has his own interests. As for MC, you couldn't even tell me if he likes anything specifically.Really it's all about characters. The author is bad at characterization, like describing the way he uniquely acts or behaves, or adding character defining moments that demonstrates the type of person they are. This is what ruins a novel, making the readers not care about the characters.A better reviewer might focus on the other problems of the novel (e.g. bad antagonists) but what I wanted to focus on was this as it's something that if not improved, the author will only produce half-baked stories.
**HONEST REVIEW FROM A REAL READER**Hey Everyone, Just thought I'd leave my review here now that I (as a reader) have read more than 143 chapters. I believe my review will be a lot more insightful than people who have only read it for 20 or so chapters.First of all**GENERAL OVERVIEW** TLDR [for those looking to skim]: This novel is quite like your MMORPG novels. However, for those who like this genre this novel ticks all the boxes. The main character is resourceful and knows how to use opportunities from past experience to create a good head-start. He has good values and is not forceful of his opinion on others and values relationships. The damage and stat numbers are also quite balanced and I must say the class structure towards an Alchemist is very interesting and is not what you expect from a typical alchemist with those skills that Ren (The MC) Has. *PROS* :* Character Development:Ren and the people around him all have a good backstory to them. They are all connected and the good thing is that there are chapters which does not just focus on Ren only where we are allowed to look into other people's perspectives and their own respective journeys.* Abilities and their UsageThe abilities that the author has come up with is definitely interesting. I would say they are the reason why I was hooked and continued to read. I really enjoy the abilities the author has created for Ren as they are very unique and have not been seen before. The way he uses the abilities are also quite planned out which adds more to the novel's flavor. *Side characters involvement and storiesThis is one of the best aspect of this novel: You get to understand the side characters who follow the MC that aren't just robots who are discarded later on once MC is oh so strong. They help out and their background is solid enough for you to expect them to be of help. *CONS* : * World Building [this one isn't too much of a con]So far it is not bad as the world of the novel is quite thoroughly explained and the back and forth between in real life and in game is interesting. It shows a good contrast BUT now even 143 chapters into the novel, the world building is not too clear and the direction for the future needs to be more fleshed out to create a higher sense of anticipation* Grammar and WritingThis one is slightly ick-y. There are quite a number of grammatical mistakes which affects the flow of the chapter. This is evident in most of the novels here on Webnovel. However, 'MMORPG Rebirth as an Alchemist' have more of these errors and I understand that the author is looking for an editor. It is not absolutely terrible and is to be honest decent but does create a jarring sensation.Depth and Gravity of the Challenges/Plot:This con has nothing to do with how Ren fights his enemies or how the author describes the fight scenes. They are all good from what I've read. What I mean with this con is that, there needs to be a linkage between what Ren does and what he's going to do. How well he utilizes his rewards to better himself or his future self. Furthermore, there is a lack of details towards a future goal or emphasis on what is to go from a certain point from X to Y. For example: (not a spoiler as this doesn't happen in the novel - just for examples sake)Ren kills a snake dungeon boss and receives a scepter of magic water that is superior to any weapon in the game. There needs to be an internal thought dilemma as to whether he utilizes it for himself, saves it for a future team partner, sells for money to help his family or himself, blueprint it, or use it as an extended quest line.What I am trying to say is deepen the plot with each plot that appears and show how they can link with each other and to be more detailed with certain events so that readers can expect the unexpected. Thank you <3 :D
Honestly it’s kinda cringe. Would not recommend