A perfect score for this masterpiece. I love how the way you describe the world background. You started with a fighting scene stating how powerful and strong your MAIN CHARACTER is. The cliffhanging chapters draw your readers to look forward to the coming update. I love the video game genre and this one is among the finest written ones.
This is the Author himself I don't want to spoil the book, so I will not mention anything about it , except to say I have the outlines for the next three books (including this one) written and developed. There is a lot to it , but I don't like revealing it all at once , it will slowly expand as the story progresses.
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only read upto 6 chapters good story until now and for those who have knowledge on mahabharat can only understand this but you can see it as fan fiction mahabharat
Great start! Love the concept and i really look forward to the romance „development“ part.Based on the few chapters i read, the FL is awesome too! Definitely worth a read so far!
quite a twst for its own genre. to be honest, it was quite refreshing to see what this platform has to offer. Overall, I like it. but still, chapters quite long, that's why for the lack of five stars.
This the same one as the other one ?
i just read raws and it was interesting, raws were up to chapter 51 so this novel is new but very interesting. everyone has their preferences and I like this one alot. i play monopoly with friends so it is fun to read it. monopoly is overpowered in this novel nonetheless good to read it! Waiting till it comes up and read it!
This book has a lot of pros but the cons have started to outweigh then IMO.I have read until chapter 250 so I can say objectively that the story has a lot going for it story wise but when you pad your word count on literally every single chapter with a notice not to pirate, which will happen regardless, then I lose trust in your integrity as an author. (I understand not wanting your hard work to be given away for free but I shouldn't have to pay for your insecurity.)Second, filler chapters and filler content to pad the word count... With the amount of information that is nonrepetative in the 250 chapters I read you could have gotten the message across in half that number.That said, I do enjoy the concept and ideas you have but they need to be executed more efficiently.(Yes I understand that most webnovels are padded with repetition and filler but that doesn't make it right, does it?)With some slight tweaking and focusing more on story development rather than useless banter between characters then this story could be great.
very good novel. well written. definetly a must read. very much recommended. Author we need more chapters, more chapters, more chapters.thank you
this book is amazing!! I picked it up about 2 weeks ago, and I'm already caught up. I love the mc, and every chapter has something interesting or action-packed. I wouldn't consider any chapter a filler one they all are amazing and relative. the only downside is that it's painful waiting on edge during the day for the chapters to come out. I am just too excited to see what happens next! Granted, the author releases more chapters daily than most authors, but this book just has me on the edge of my seat too much. I hope for a mass release sometime soon. Overall 10/10 recommendation.
I've SOLVED it!!! Yes, SOLVED it.The Synopsis is not wrong!I've solved the mystery to why the plot is so different from the synopsis.First of all CHECK the author's name.Yes, the author name is 'younger sister'. That's right, the author is the Mc's younger sister before transmigration.Now for the explanation. The mc wrote the book, died and was transmigrated (as explained in chapter 1). however, his omnipotent devastated 'younger sister' decided to revive to him and heavily modify the contents of his book, claiming the book as her own, before posting it on online platforms, such as (webnovel), which explains the why the summary didn't tally with the first chapter. Don't forget it's his point of view, not the author's.Aside from the characters names and identity, from his previous novel, the plot is completely changed so we can officially consider the edited book as his sister's.To started off, she revived her brother by transmigrating him into the body Lin Yao. Why Lin Yao? Yes, his character settings has a 'younger sister'. Maybe just to remind him of his previous younger sister.Next, she further awarded most of the female leads with the system, with its primary objective to force them to be in a relationship with her brother. Maybe to spite him as he didn't have a girlfriend in his previous life.As for the notebook he received on his birthday? He hasn't found it yet. Now let's hope he doesn't find it, or the fourth wall will be broken. ??Back to the Synopsis last sentence "Sis, where is your future sister-in-law?"Good Question! Younger sister, the Author, aka, GOD, shall award all potential candidates with the system. The winner will be the one who has completed all of the system tasks and marry him as the reward.10/5 if my bulls*** is actually right.Please like this to give the novel more love. Who knows? I might actually be right.